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The Fork In The Road

here i am at the fork in the road

the futures uncertain 

i feel so alone

i could go left 

i could go right

i'm on my own

no friend in sight

at the crossroads i must decide

must face the future

i cannot hide

looking back i can see

how on this road i came to be


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  1. Date: 3/31/2013 8:05:00 PM

    A seemingly lonely fork in the road. So you are thinking about who you are, and where you are going. I know from experience this is not a comfortable feeling. However, I do sense the hope you have and that you know you face your own future. I do wish you the best and send a positive thought from my brain into space for you. Perhaps you will see it as one of the forest lights. I hope you find friends and that your path will be illuminated. You have an exciting journey ahead, no doubt.

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 7:14:00 PM

    !!!

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 2:32:00 PM

    Whichever road you take (right or left) will end up the correct one in the end... Terry (nice poem)

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 12:20:00 PM

    Taking detours on life's route can cloud a mind. I say take both and enjoy the ride! Good piece!...she remembers some things, but her funny it's still intact!

    Hopkins Avatar Lori Hopkins Date: 2/14/2013 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Good advice and I'm glad she still retains her sense of humor. :)
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 12:00:00 PM

    Lovely poem, can really relate.

    Hopkins Avatar Lori Hopkins Date: 2/14/2013 12:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks. I will be checking out your writting in a few. <3