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  1. Date: 9/29/2013 2:14:00 PM
    It came to be by you literally biting the hand that fed you. I should not have taken in a cheap aging las Vegas whore such as yourself. I went above SBD beyond for you. Four days after I took you out for your birthday you are begging my husband to be Hus "fuck buddy." Sisters do not touch their sister's husband. You have no morals. You are s loose woman. Hell the neighbor knows that one. You told me not to tell my husband you sent with black guy. You are a racist slut who betrayed me.

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 7:37:00 PM
    If you are humiliated that I wrote this under your heartfelt poetry, then just realize it is karma for you having relations with my husband. If not that, then certainly for plotting on me. You are about the worst sister anyone could have. No Lori he did not love you. What would you have done if he had? Certainly something to hurt your own sister worse. You have no soul.

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 7:29:00 PM
    How about going right where you apologize to your sister. Right now you are going left where you make up lies and further humiliate your sister. I didn't bring you to my home so you could mess with my husband. I tried to help you because you were unemployed and desperate. Take a better path and stop pining away for my husband and get your own life. It's not necessary to take your sister's. Try to value yourself.

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 6:12:00 PM
    Did you care which road your sister would take when you thought you would move down the Newport Coast with her husband of nine years? Well, yes, it's good you can see how the road came to be. Trying to steal your sisters husband can never end well.

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 6:04:00 PM
    You wouldn't be so alone if you didn't bite the hand that fed you.

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 8:05:00 PM
    A seemingly lonely fork in the road. So you are thinking about who you are, and where you are going. I know from experience this is not a comfortable feeling. However, I do sense the hope you have and that you know you face your own future. I do wish you the best and send a positive thought from my brain into space for you. Perhaps you will see it as one of the forest lights. I hope you find friends and that your path will be illuminated. You have an exciting journey ahead, no doubt.

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 7:14:00 PM

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 2:32:00 PM
    Whichever road you take (right or left) will end up the correct one in the end... Terry (nice poem)

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 12:00:00 PM
    Lovely poem, can really relate.