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  1. Date: 3/2/2013 8:32:00 PM
    My hearty congratulations on your fantastic win my dear friend David! A great write indeed! Thank you so much for sharing! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:06:00 PM
    Hi David, :-) congratulations with your sweet and spicy win in Cyndi's out of the box" SENSUAL POETRY. ADULTS ONLY." Contest* Always & Forever ~TEX

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:28:00 PM
    You go David ;) I'd like to see this in present tense? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:10:00 PM
    Oh, such a beautiful poem, David, and it also smells of love. Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's contest. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 1:35:00 PM
    I remember commenting on this one before, liked it then and like it still, I'm glad you entered it in another contest and had a win with it, congrats!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 11:23:00 AM
    I knew I would find this poem in this winners' list! Congratulations, David! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:31:00 AM
    David--knew this would be with the winners!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 11:59:00 PM
    Wow Dafydd your hotel or mine lol....great write ..Seren

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 10:58:00 PM
    Came back here because It dawned on me that it was not on a recent winners list. Is it for the free verse contest then? I just thought of why I did not see it on the hotel contest winners list. Maybe you did not enter it because it was over 20 lines? it sure is a Good one!!!

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 11:52:00 AM
    Yeah... It's getting hot in here. Lol. Love it David!

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 6:35:00 AM
    ssssszzzz Sizzling from the grill..I guess Cyndi would love it:B-)

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 2:47:00 PM
    Steamy, David. Very erotic :)

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 1:22:00 PM
    HOT David, the tabloids will be seeking you out LOL!

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 11:27:00 PM
    I feel I was trapped inside this room with your sensual expressions and could not wait to see another love duet performing intimate affection to each other. (^_^)

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 9:17:00 PM
    Wow! Beautiful, romantic, and passionate. I love it! Thanks for you comments..xx Holly Moore

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 8:27:00 PM
    Hello David, very pretty, and sensual.. this poem is perfect for Cyndi's contest as well... love the passion.. xox~TEX

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 5:14:00 PM
    Wooooww this is really a passionate one from you David, I feel the heat in here hahaha, a wonderful penned in a wonderful love story, you deserve to win this :D wishing you a good luck for the contest :D - hug, yanny

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 2:18:00 PM
    The temperature just went up a few degrees in here David, nice write for the hotel room contest, different from my scary one, have a great weekend, xxx

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 1:39:00 PM
    Hot writing! Nicely done too. I'm going to read a few more of your poems immediately. Jack

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 9:29:00 AM
    WOW! What I liked the most among all that sizzle and coming full circle with the damp smell of the room turning into the wonderful scent of LOVE! I must admit, I felt a little....guilty peeking in on this, asked for it!