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Camouflaged as Love


The hotel room was dark and lonely. It smelt of damp!
We entered cautiously not wanting to make a sound…
You looked nervously towards me, your dark eyes glistened, they spoke
Of passion. I held my hand out, touched your soft skin, a sensation 
Rippled throughout my body. Your full lips shone like stars, I could feel
The excitement raising. Simultaneously we moved forward I felt your taught 
Breasts pushing into my chest, my breath getting faster. I kissed your neck
Tasted your perfume, we sank slowly onto the bed, undressing as we fell.
Hands moving quicker, the grip getting tighter. Unconstrained.
I could feel the silkiness of your inner thighs, I bury my head tasting your 
Diamond… No… A Pearl inside an Oyster. My tongue moves but I am speechless, the drought is over I am ready to drink. Ecstasy. Inching my way up kissing every
Inch of your naked body, though blind of smell I see the valleys of love before me.
Unnervingly smooth. Halcyon moments. You smile as you gently lower to your knees,
Your wet lips caress, your hands full of promise. Silence is broken… prayers are offered!!!
As hips glide back and forth, we take one another to the zenith of the night…then as 
We lay together amongst love stained sheets reeking of lust…I lay in silence,
The hotel room was light and warm. It smelt of love!

© 14/2/2013

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  1. Date: 3/2/2013 8:32:00 PM

    My hearty congratulations on your fantastic win my dear friend David! A great write indeed! Thank you so much for sharing! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:06:00 PM

    Hi David, :-) congratulations with your sweet and spicy win in Cyndi's out of the box" SENSUAL POETRY. ADULTS ONLY." Contest* Always & Forever ~TEX

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:28:00 PM

    You go David ;) I'd like to see this in present tense? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:10:00 PM

    Oh, such a beautiful poem, David, and it also smells of love. Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's contest. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 1:35:00 PM

    I remember commenting on this one before, liked it then and like it still, I'm glad you entered it in another contest and had a win with it, congrats!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 11:23:00 AM

    I knew I would find this poem in this winners' list! Congratulations, David! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:31:00 AM

    David--knew this would be with the winners!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 11:59:00 PM

    Wow Dafydd your hotel or mine lol....great write ..Seren

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 10:58:00 PM

    Came back here because It dawned on me that it was not on a recent winners list. Is it for the free verse contest then? I just thought of why I did not see it on the hotel contest winners list. Maybe you did not enter it because it was over 20 lines? it sure is a Good one!!!

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 4:30:00 PM

    Hi David.. wow! No, that's all, just.. WoW! And thanks for commenting on my poem and your warm welcome

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 11:52:00 AM

    Yeah... It's getting hot in here. Lol. Love it David!

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 6:35:00 AM

    ssssszzzz Sizzling from the grill..I guess Cyndi would love it:B-)

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 2:47:00 PM

    Steamy, David. Very erotic :)

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 1:22:00 PM

    HOT David, the tabloids will be seeking you out LOL!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 12:45:00 PM

    Wow David, the romance and passion flows through this like an waves in an endless ocean. Great job! Hugs Gail

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:32:00 AM

    hot soup boiling over and smells good too..

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 9:01:00 AM

    Oh oh David was deep sea diving! Lol..a specialty of mine also : ) Ecstasy in ink! Go wipe your mouth and Good luck : )

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 11:27:00 PM

    I feel I was trapped inside this room with your sensual expressions and could not wait to see another love duet performing intimate affection to each other. (^_^)

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 9:17:00 PM

    Wow! Beautiful, romantic, and passionate. I love it! Thanks for you comments..xx Holly Moore

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 8:27:00 PM

    Hello David, very pretty, and sensual.. this poem is perfect for Cyndi's contest as well... love the passion.. xox~TEX

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 5:14:00 PM

    Wooooww this is really a passionate one from you David, I feel the heat in here hahaha, a wonderful penned in a wonderful love story, you deserve to win this :D wishing you a good luck for the contest :D - hug, yanny

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 2:18:00 PM

    The temperature just went up a few degrees in here David, nice write for the hotel room contest, different from my scary one, have a great weekend, xxx

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 1:39:00 PM

    Hot writing! Nicely done too. I'm going to read a few more of your poems immediately. Jack

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 9:29:00 AM

    WOW! What I liked the most among all that sizzle and fire...you coming full circle with the damp smell of the room turning into the wonderful scent of LOVE! I must admit, I felt a little....guilty peeking in on this, but....you asked for it!

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:28:00 AM

    Whew!...Alright David, that will be quite enough from you, sir!...I'm a lonely old man and it's not fair, it's just not fair - Tim

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 5:41:00 AM

    There is a thunderbolt of passion, a night of rage. This poem smells of love...and victory!

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 1:31:00 AM

    Hi David what passion, as usual great words from a master pen man, loved it, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:42:00 PM

    a SIZZLER, DAvid!!!! wow!!! (and complete opposite feeling from what MY poor hotel inhabitant was feeling)

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:38:00 PM

    this one sizzles with sensuality....nicely penned David

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 5:46:00 PM

    Great knock out and amazing write with tact too. It makes me feel youthful.

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