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Yellow leaves

Yellow leaves falling
into the lake. Its surface
caressed by the breeze.

My thoughts hop from leaf to leaf 
cleaving the breeze up to the Sun.

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  1. Date: 3/18/2013 2:00:00 PM

    Nicely done on this tanka. love phyl

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 1:39:00 PM

    Nice...I get a clear image and thought from this one.