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The girl with a smile like the universe

A smile so bright it makes the sun jealous, 
Making the fiery star blaze down with such inferno, 
But her smile still makes you feel incredibly hotter, 
A smile so incredible it makes the blind see through their hearts,
Only her smile can make the heart see, 
A smile so beautiful it makes the flowers blossom in the winter, 
Impossible but with a smile like that beauty grows even in the coldest days,
A smile so gorgeous it beats watching the stars and the amazing moon at night,
I'd rather stop and stare and watch your smile change the world.

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 11:00:00 AM

    Love the way you have expressed love through the powerful entities of creation.. "A smile so beautiful it makes the blind see through their hearts"... brilliant!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:09:00 AM

    LOVELY!

    Appelgryn Avatar Wade Appelgryn Date: 2/27/2013 11:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 4:28:00 AM

    lovely poem Wade and nice dedication to your girl..

    Appelgryn Avatar Wade Appelgryn Date: 2/17/2013 11:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Asma
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:15:00 AM

    Wade great dedication....David

    Appelgryn Avatar Wade Appelgryn Date: 2/14/2013 10:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you David
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 7:15:00 AM

    :) Lovely poem for your valentine

    Appelgryn Avatar Wade Appelgryn Date: 2/14/2013 10:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks :) but she's more than that to me