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Donna Jones

Date: 3/14/2013 6:50:00 PM

Hope your love does last forever Becca ..congrats. Donna

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/10/2013 9:36:00 PM

BECCA, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA

craig cornish

Date: 3/10/2013 12:50:00 PM

Great win in Andrea’s contest Becca and sad, though too often true.

Becca Lucas Date: 3/10/2013 4:05:00 PM

Thanks Craig, and isn't it funny how we seem to know that someone will end up breaking our heart. But we love them anyway.

Maria Paz Samelo

Date: 3/10/2013 11:32:00 AM

great love my friend Becca. Lovely write and Congratulations on your win. cheers! :) Hugs, Maria

David Williams

Date: 3/10/2013 7:38:00 AM

Bec, congrats on your win, a very touching write...David

kash poet

Date: 3/10/2013 7:10:00 AM

Love this!!Congrats Becca on your win in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2013 12:18:00 AM

Becca,I really liked yours. Rereading my number 8 poems, I am realizing I like them just as well as the number 7's!! Thanks so much for supporting my contest.

Eileen Ghali

Date: 2/28/2013 12:47:00 AM

Becca....I've been wanting to try out this form, but...it's a lot of work! You've done a SUPERB job. It goes in my favorite file! Yes...I do admit..I've been reading your work. I commented once and didn't get a response, so I thought....I'd wait to see if I did get one in time! GLAD I did! You have great talent, my dear! I'm looking for a rather "intensely passionate" one you wrote...but no go. Wonder where it has gone?

Ruben O.

Date: 2/17/2013 3:39:00 PM

Soup Mail returned!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/16/2013 6:49:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/16/2013 1:23:00 PM

Hey Becca check out my poem now that I have made the changes. I like it much better, thanks for pointing out where I went wrong.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/16/2013 9:15:00 AM

Good morning Becca. I hope the day greets you with sunshine.

Becca Lucas Date: 2/16/2013 12:20:00 PM

Thanks, Rick... It just did :D

Joseph May

Date: 2/16/2013 8:22:00 AM

beautiful write Becca....loved it....winning wishes

Becca Lucas Date: 2/16/2013 12:22:00 PM

thanks Joseph! :)

david scott

Date: 2/15/2013 5:15:00 PM

ANBOTHER COOL WRITE SOUP ME HOW ARE YOU BACK HERE ON NEXT WEEK XXDAVIDSCOTT

Becca Lucas Date: 2/16/2013 12:22:00 PM

thanks David .. thanks for the soup mail... love to hear from you mate :)

frank herrera

Date: 2/15/2013 5:09:00 PM

Some one with your Beauty...and Charismatic IQ Doubts WAYYYYYY too much! You don't have a clue... to the power of your MAGIC SPELL.

Becca Lucas Date: 2/16/2013 11:09:00 AM

Aw Frank... :) thank you!

Heather Ober

Date: 2/15/2013 9:01:00 AM

Oh, this is AMAZING! You kicked this form's butt!

Becca Lucas Date: 2/16/2013 11:08:00 AM

haha Heather!! I love your comment! :D Thank you!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 2/15/2013 6:51:00 AM

Oh mercy me Becca...this little gem really tugs at the heart-strings...the last line is a real stunner and wraps it up perfectly - Tim

Becca Lucas Date: 2/16/2013 11:05:00 AM

Aw thank you Tim.... I love that they tugged your heart-strings! You sure tug mine sometimes! Pay back :D

WORD CRAFT

Date: 2/15/2013 3:54:00 AM

''I’ll still love you long after you have gone ''...POWERFUL.....that's true love..ageless..has no expiry date...awesome piece Becca...thank you :-)

Becca Lucas Date: 2/16/2013 11:03:00 AM

No exp date, good way to put it! Thank you WC :D

Donna Jones

Date: 2/14/2013 3:15:00 PM

Love.....good thing we have a lot of it to share..our hearts never run out huh??? Good luck....

Becca Lucas Date: 2/16/2013 11:02:00 AM

So true Donna! thank you!

David Williams

Date: 2/14/2013 4:03:00 AM

Becca I just love this bitter sweet tale, good luck...David

Becca Lucas Date: 2/16/2013 10:57:00 AM

thank you David :)

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 2/13/2013 11:38:00 PM

The last line is wonderful, Becca... Great entry...Good Luck in the contest...

Becca Lucas Date: 2/16/2013 10:56:00 AM

Thank you Mehnaz :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/13/2013 6:47:00 PM

Yes I still prefer this one. Check last line second stanza.

Becca Lucas Date: 2/13/2013 6:52:00 PM

thank you :)

Ruben O.

Date: 2/13/2013 6:37:00 PM

Well, I dont know which one is the best; I like them both. I can't tell about the meter (Im always wrong) but I really like this poem. My best wishes. Ruben.

Becca Lucas Date: 2/16/2013 10:56:00 AM

I'm so happy that you visited my poems Ruben :)

Gail Angel Doyle

Date: 2/13/2013 6:04:00 PM

Beautiful and very heartfelt poem for Andrea's contest. Hugs, Gail

Becca Lucas Date: 2/16/2013 10:55:00 AM

thanks Gail!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/13/2013 5:57:00 PM

My, my who is this wretched fellow? Dump him first and he will never get you out of his mind. Great entry for the contest. Yo have quite the imagination my dear.

Becca Lucas Date: 2/16/2013 10:55:00 AM

Who's the one with the imagination, mister? :D

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/13/2013 5:57:00 PM

I believe you worked the rest of the poem from that final line, it is that good! I really enjoyed reading this fabulous poem this evening! What a wonderful piece, it's so very awesome, Great Work!!

Becca Lucas Date: 2/16/2013 10:54:00 AM

Thank you Russell :)