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RISING SUN

Peeping eye,
Out of the dreams,
The streams,
The reflections,
Of a calm night,
Beautiful sight,
Shine again,
Brighten the shore,
Deep to the core,
And bring out,
The inner light,
Of life,
Beautiful bright,
Kissing the sea,
Make us see,
A new day,
Through your eyes.

Word Craft
2013

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  1. Date: 4/8/2013 3:06:00 AM

    Word, I admire your "Rising Sun" ... it's gorgeous! - The sun gives me joy and peace in mind. - I want to share my sunset with you: "Sensual And Beautiful" - Hope your week will be full of sunshine and joy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    CRAFT Avatar WORD CRAFT Date: 4/8/2013 3:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow perfect harmony Anne..the two really blend beautifully..."Rising Sun" is a piece i did at Village market after the painting of one Chandvi Shah..she was exhibiting her work there...immediately i got into the exhibition hall that painting caught me soo deeply..that i asked for a leaf and wrote what i felt about it..then asked for the artist behind the work..and the rest is history :-)
  1. Date: 4/3/2013 8:17:00 AM

    Great write!! You are talented..and you've become a fav of mine.

    CRAFT Avatar WORD CRAFT Date: 4/8/2013 3:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm so humbled Script..i dont know what to say...thank you a lot and do have a beautiful week :-)
  1. Date: 3/15/2013 11:46:00 AM

    A nice read :)

    CRAFT Avatar WORD CRAFT Date: 4/3/2013 5:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh thank you so much Gypsy..for your encouraging comments...i'm much humbled :-)
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 5:20:00 AM

    amazing

    CRAFT Avatar WORD CRAFT Date: 2/21/2013 1:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Betty...:-)
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 3:05:00 PM

    word craft?

    CRAFT Avatar WORD CRAFT Date: 2/14/2013 4:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh..yeah dear...that's him...lol :-)
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 9:18:00 AM

    Like the imagery you painted here... Thanks for sharing and welcome to the Soup...

    CRAFT Avatar WORD CRAFT Date: 2/14/2013 4:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh...deep thanks Veetil...and thanks for your kind gesture i feel welcome already :-)
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 7:34:00 AM

    Lovely poem :) enjoyed your words tonight :D - hug, yanny

    CRAFT Avatar WORD CRAFT Date: 2/14/2013 4:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    aaww...thank you lots Yanny..and you made my day...hugs..:-)
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 7:15:00 AM

    An excellent poetic image! Give you a 7!

    CRAFT Avatar WORD CRAFT Date: 2/14/2013 4:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You always humble me sir....Thank you..i'm still a learner :-)