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I want your SEEDS

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I want your SEEDS

**"And his name was Jack"**

No one perceives what abides above the clouds. 
A giant, a harp, maybe golden eggs. 
I demand to see and feel, before I believe. 
A castle, a dream…. I want the magic beans!!!
~~~


I'm the daughter of a farmer. 
I have a donkey to ride, a story to tell.
“Jack and the Beanstalk”; my favorite tale. 
 
Once upon, a morbid dawn. 
I inhale a tiny simple yawn~ I levitate like the sun. 
I head out the door, towards the markets shore.
I grabbed my ass to stroll along the open path. 
My shoes aim out to the nearest creek. 
My ass and I desired a drink. 
There I saw an old Englishman, sitting on a log. 
It looked as if time was approaching his brink. 
In his hand, he had a sack.
A bag, a bag, embroil of ivory and black. 
His eyes were not from this ground. 
His body fragile, he uttered a moaning sound.
He was of dirt. 
I was pure. 
He pledged his life to me. 
I debated.... with many thoughts, 
Although his eyes... 
My eyes... Will never meet again.
I want what is in the bag!
He said, "I'll give you anything for that ass.
My legs and bones can’t hold up on their own, no more!”
I knelt down to where he sat. 
Smelling his essence of rot. 
I reached forward and grabbed his only baggage. 
He said, "This bag is all I got!" 
 
I answered, "And this sir is a fine ass." 
He replied, "I have no cash." 
Scowling at him, “No I want your demon seeds!" 
How my blood grew thin... 
Inhaling and exhaling out his sin... 
The old man all shriveled and timeworn, 
Propose the birthright of the seeds. 
Yes, plant them! Plant them... 
I cried excitedly! 
He pats the field. 
Said there I am done. 
Now clock as it expands. 
 
To breed this story short... 
He dispense his seeds. 
AND, I GAVE HIM MY ASS. 
 
 
Lol...  BY;PD    (for seed contest)

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  1. Date: 9/9/2014 6:04:00 PM
    you want my seeds? shouldn't you kiss me first.

  1. Date: 9/9/2014 6:01:00 PM
    great play on words, great twist of the story, great poetry, great Caesars Ghost did you notice the time. I have to run.

  1. Date: 8/29/2014 2:01:00 PM
    Dear Linda, In your poem there is good planting of seeds. Your creating power is great and what a poem which you have made connection with farmer, baggage, seeds and ass to compose the poem. I really enjoyed after reading your poem. Great work. Thanks and regards. Kamal

  1. Date: 8/13/2014 9:21:00 AM
    It reminiscence of ,Ernest Hemingway,s ,old man & sea story, Such a story was encapsulated in a poem. Fascinating indeed..Linda Ch v ramana

  1. Date: 6/10/2014 5:01:00 PM
    Absolutely loved this! I had a wry smile on my face the entire time I was reading it. The wit, genius. Love & light, Linda. - Raven

  1. Date: 5/13/2014 8:53:00 PM
    I love the subtleness of this...how risqué ...If I had a free day I would love to sit and read your poetry or better yet you read it to me :) .....hugs Tim

  1. Date: 5/2/2014 9:21:00 AM
    Checking out some of your older poems; had to comment on this one, though! Wow! witty, tantalizing, verging on a mixture of sensual and erotic! Should I say "lucky Jack" ? cu // paul

  1. Date: 2/19/2014 6:43:00 PM
    Hi Linda, Well, your imagination flies again. Another piece written in your own inimitable style. What does one say, you are Linda, You tell your story in simple, easy to understand language. I always Love that. The whole piece is so cleverly put together. You pull all the pieces together with your golden pen and place them on the canvas for us to see. The usual exceptional write Linda. Yours always....MIKE. X

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 7:42:00 AM
    Really nicely constructed poem - it has a certain warmth about it, and you express emotion throughout it very well. Nice piece here, I enjoyed reading this one.

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 1:45:00 PM
    Linda, You are so silly. But I loved the poem.....Hugs....Roger

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:11:00 PM
    Linda You are going to corrupt innocent people like me writing this sexily intense stuff. LOL Nice job my friend. Creative and imaginative. Hugs Thanks for the congrats on my Poetry Dan poem.

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 12:42:00 AM
    Wickedly beautiful piece of imagination! I wonder how much of my innocence has left of me,,hahaha...I asked my husband to read your work..sure he liked it with a wink and a wicked grin before he left my side...^_^.... Thanks friend Linda....please post more. I'm learning...love from an unknown friend, Wendy.... will enjoy rereading this one ^_^

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:41:00 PM
    Another amzing story you never cease to amaze me

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 3:43:00 PM
    What a great read, had me smiling before my morning cuppa...Peter

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 8:45:00 AM
    LOL now this is some girl power,#salutes....Godwins:D

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 7:15:00 AM
    wow..... you got me there to you zone..

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 8:13:00 PM
    Enjoyed your fun poem about dear old Jack and the seeds, PD.

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 4:14:00 PM
    hi I enjoyed fine pen

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 5:51:00 AM
    A perfect poem. Gave me a good laugh. Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 10:43:00 AM
    Hi, ever dearest sis of mine! How are you? I'm stopping by to reread this winning masterpiece of yours. Thanks for the joy and big smile! Sooo enjoyed as always! I also want to say HI with my warmest big hugs! Missing you my dearest sis! I hope all is well! Thank you sooo much for your warm congratulatory comments on my poem. I wish you a happy and wonderful day! More big hugs! love much 4ever, Leonora

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