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Dying Heart

Stabbed in the heart, I’m starting to bleed
I’m becoming cold as the touch of death
Yet I don’t want to say goodbye

Painful word, insane cry, sweet goodbye
Pain pounds on me as I bleed
Thumping me until I reach death

Life is being drained by the angel of death
Forcing me to say goodbye
Suffering the more I bleed

Yet even as I bleed to death I refuse to tell you goodbye

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  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:34:00 PM
    HI JULIE, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:35:00 AM
    Julie congrats on your win and I am glad it is not goodbye...David

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 12:06:00 AM
    This one was quite moving. Congrats for your win, Julie.

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 12:49:00 PM
    This is how I feel when I get my heart broken.... very powerful poem

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 9:15:00 AM
    awesome new form friend Julie. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Maria