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Never Ending Circle

Upon the icy back of winter she rides unnoticed, like your shadow  in midday sunlight
She bides her time while secretly infusing warmth into the frozen earth below. Like a Nursemaid she feeds and nurture off springs.  Shhh...hear the stirrings of the new growth awakening!

the warm earth parts 
for the tulips's first leaf -- 
gentle rain 


Quietly, gentle rain and warm sunrays twinning, absorb, sustain and enhance life.  Soft mist is disperse in midair, cascading gently, they land like crystal dew drops on lush green grass. Soon, the rabbit and hare in search of food and water will run through these fields assured that the never ending circle of life will continue.   


young ones thirsting
Sip soft crystal dew drops--
Blooming smiles





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  1. Date: 3/7/2013 6:26:00 PM

    congrats on a great win Annalise

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:58:00 PM

    !!! Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 7:17:00 AM

    Wonderful, Annalise! Congrats on the win!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 5:50:00 PM

    The circle is complete with beautiful prose!! And what lovely haiku to enhance your words....Congratulations, Annelise!!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 4:20:00 PM

    so beautiful about spring and needful rain. Congrats. I am glad I am finally seeing this one.

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 3:14:00 PM

    Congratulation on your win. Nicely written. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 11:49:00 AM

    Loved the movement in this !!! Congrats on your win !! Great haiku!!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:22:00 AM

    Annalise, congrats on this great write in Debbie's contest!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 9:41:00 PM

    Annalise, ;-) Congratulations with your nice winning poem in Debbie's "Spring haibun" contest... xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 7:06:00 PM

    Very nice entry!! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 9:20:00 AM

    great imagery. Still love the warmest part of the circle. Nothing to shovel.

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 8:28:00 AM

    beautiful write here, my friend - love it

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 11:32:00 PM

    sounds like new hope and new beggining.... lovely.

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 7:42:00 PM

    Lovely imagery here! Very smooth flowing! Thanks for sharing! :)

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 6:53:00 PM

    Lovely haibun including a good haiku!Thanks for reading my writes, I have enjoyed yours this evening. Light & love