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In a Hotel Room

Lost within herself
Hiding in a darkened corner.
Heavy footfalls across the carpet
Causing her to silently shake.
His smile filled of malice
Her heart drowning in fear.
Maniacal laughter poisoning the air
Her ear drums threatening to burst.
Wrapping his demonic hands around her wrists
Seeming to burn her to the bone.
Tears rushing down her cheeks
Screams ripping from her lungs.
Clothe forced between her trembling lips
Ropes embedded in her skin.
Bruises conquering her every limb
Her eyes swelling shut.
Fingers slowly crushing her throat
Her life slowly beginning to fade.
Not many people consider what happens
To a lost girl in a hotel room.

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  1. Date: 2/20/2013 9:29:00 AM

    Thank you so much everyone!! -Arianna xo

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 3:50:00 AM

    A hotel room with a view... a view that moves me............ A "s t o r y" telling free verse....... :-) Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 2:02:00 AM

    Many Congratulations on your win Arianna, sorry i am a bit late xx

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:38:00 AM

    Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:45:00 PM

    Arianna, I really like your poem. You took it to the dark side indeed!! Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 4:17:00 PM

    Ariann, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 1:16:00 PM

    - Very good poem, I like your suggestion for B.E.S. contest. - Read my suggestions if you want. - Wish you all the best. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)