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Richard D Seal

Date: 6/9/2013 5:18:00 PM

Either reality or a dream this is a lovely story written with your usual poetic grace. Yes he was chatting you up, who wouldn't? ha ha. This poem has just the right atmosphere to it. Take care, Richard

Date: 3/16/2013 3:25:00 PM

That would have been a really strange dream! I wonder why there was so much excitement and then just... complete silence. Somewhat eerie I think. And why would a complete stranger ask if he's ever lied to you before? I like poetry and stories that creep you out... and this one does...

Timothy Hicks Date: 3/16/2013 8:34:00 PM

Yeah I did read your little footnote... sometimes it's hard to capture impressions of people without actually being there in person. This makes me want to share some of my creepy writings!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/18/2013 5:34:00 AM

I loved your poem and the twist of a dream in the end dear

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/13/2013 6:05:00 PM

It is nice to see this one back again. I enjoyed reading it.

harry horsman

Date: 2/13/2013 4:12:00 AM

love your dream, Becca makes for wonderful poetry..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2013 10:55:00 PM

Dang, and I thought it was going to become a romantic one at the end!! hmmm, wonder if I read it before. It sounds vaguely familiar to me. you have to tell me what REALLY happened. you said it was all true until that one part. What happened after that part? This was very interesting.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/12/2013 7:00:00 PM

Thanks for reading my writes, I have enjoyed yours this evening. It really took me there with you! Light & love

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 2/12/2013 1:47:00 PM

Thank you Becca, I would have given you the first place:) - Lovely - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

david scott

Date: 2/12/2013 12:05:00 PM

this is what im talking about darling this is the one i read before you deleated liked alot capturs the time p[erfectly love it xx davidscott

Mystic Rose

Date: 2/12/2013 11:41:00 AM

I'm glad you re-posted it, I really enjoyed reading it, Happy Valentine Day ahead of time Becca xxx

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/12/2013 11:39:00 AM

I loved this incredible and dreamy write my friend! I thought this was a delightful poem, one that I enjoyed reading this afternoon! What a great experience, did deserve more than a third place rating though!

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