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In A Hotel Room

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In A Hotel Room

For a long time there I stood;
Yet another entrance to hell.
Though I already understood,
There's this feeling I can't tell.

Scent of sin present in the air
Reminder of what I must do.
Life has not been all that fair,
Still, I wish today is untrue.

The door to hell is inviting;
Smiling, out the devil came.
His touch had been inciting
But I felt nothing but shame.

There I was, in a hotel room;
Sold both my body and soul.
Flower that will never bloom;
Never again to be put whole.

By him I let myself get tainted;
And I will go to hell and back,
To keep my beloved child sated.
There will be no turning back.


*For the "In A Hotel Room" contest
*Written: February 12, 2013

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  1. Date: 2/20/2013 3:58:00 AM
    A sad poem........ well deserved win congrats :-)

    Guazon Avatar Grushen Guazon
    Date: 2/24/2013 12:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much. :) Take care!!! :) "heart":shen
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:59:00 AM
    Many Congratulations on your win Grushen sorry i am a bit late xx

    Guazon Avatar Grushen Guazon
    Date: 2/24/2013 12:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's alright. As they say, better late than never right? *joke*. Thank you for your comment. :)
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:35:00 AM
    Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Guazon Avatar Grushen Guazon
    Date: 2/24/2013 12:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to write a comment. Thank you so much. :)
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:39:00 PM
    A sad one very well described. Congrats on your win . It was well deserved.

    Guazon Avatar Grushen Guazon
    Date: 2/24/2013 12:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you vety much. :) Thank you for liking my simple poem. :)
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 5:09:00 PM
    The old, old storywell retold.. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

    Guazon Avatar Grushen Guazon
    Date: 2/24/2013 12:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. I often write poems about love, life and poverty. It's easier for me to draw a painful picture than those happy pictires. :)
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 4:15:00 PM
    Grushen, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD

    Guazon Avatar Grushen Guazon
    Date: 2/24/2013 12:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much. :) Thank you for all your encouraging words. I appreciate all your comments. :)
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 5:44:00 AM
    Nice write :) Best of Luck for the contest

    Guazon Avatar Grushen Guazon
    Date: 2/19/2013 5:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much!!! :)
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 10:18:00 AM
    No nice experience in a hotel room Grushen - Well written. - Good luck in the contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Guazon Avatar Grushen Guazon
    Date: 2/12/2013 10:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. It's a scene from a story I never finished writing. I tend to write sad poems, I have no idea why. :) Some of which I never experienced. Sorry, I said too much. :) Again, thank you very much!
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 10:03:00 AM
    I loved it! Nice job.

    Guazon Avatar Grushen Guazon
    Date: 2/12/2013 10:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much! :)