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Blurry Mirror

Steam clouds on mirror
Hide the reflection in blurred
Chose to be unknown

Hidden soul not speak
It says through the words of eyes
I'm living in you

Unnamed solely side
Lived from the remained shadow
Under self conscious

Friend or predator
Both are potentially hurts
Pick the wise answer

Make peace with yourself 
Take two sides in good or bad
Those, the shapes of you

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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 8:24:00 AM

    Good morning Yanny

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 9:30:00 AM

    Beautiful treatment of Haiku. Cryptic, and yet so meaningful.... Hugs to ya..... Jake

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 5/16/2013 6:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you John wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/6/2013 4:31:00 PM

    When you get to my age the best Mirror is a Blurry mirror. Good morning Yanny.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 3/7/2013 8:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rick, :D wishing you a great day there :D- hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 11:11:00 PM

    Good morning Yanny. I like this one alot.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/15/2013 10:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rick, glad that you like it :D wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 6:34:00 AM

    Deep..very deep :-)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/13/2013 6:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Word Craft for your kindly visit to my page :) it's a pleasure :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 8:20:00 PM

    !!!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/12/2013 9:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :D !!!?
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 7:54:00 AM

    ‡ This Felt As Though I Were Walking Slowly Through An Abandoned Castle, Sweet Beautiful Yanny ˜ Suddenly Arriving At The Threshold Of A Scarlets Red Door Ajar As Reaching Out And It's Screeching Hinges A Canopy Bed There She Lay Smiling In Haunting Splendours Beckoning With Her Oceans Beautiful Eyes ˜ 'Selene!' ˜ Wonderful Painting In A Touch Of Poe, And Thank You For Your Sweet Beauty's Kind Warm Visit ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/12/2013 8:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are most welcome dear Rachel :D, you always bring the splendid things within your juicy words :)- hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 6:26:00 AM

    Deep and very well written my friend - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/12/2013 7:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne :D wishing you a great day :D - hug, yanny