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Crying, waiting, hoping

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Crying, waiting, hoping

Stuck in the friend zone, oh what a misery
I dream of giving you all my loving 
I wish that you and I were meant to be
But instead I’m crying, waiting and hoping

There are lonesome tears in my eyes
It’s all too much to keep deep in my heart
A million cries for each million goodbyes
It’s driving me crazy and tearing me apart

I want to tell you but I’m afraid you won’t stay
Sometimes I wish that I was dead
Don’t pass me by; don’t walk away
I’ll try to be happy but I’ll cry instead

I’m tired of crying, waiting and hoping
I really want this pain to end 
I’m barely breathing and slowly dying
But you are just my everlasting friend

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  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:20:00 PM

    Julie.. Congratulations on your win :-) PD

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 3:36:00 PM

    Julie congrats on your win, love this one...David

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:33:00 PM

    I agree with Heather. Well done and congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 12:54:00 PM

    Julie, you did a great job with this one! Your words brought to life the pain of losing our first loves. I think all can relate to this. Congrats on your win in my contest :)