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Sunset

Wan shades of carmine and carnelian Dying in a sunset’s languid demise The flame of pink, the smoke of lavender Grudgingly giving rise…to Final feeble glowing light of velvety purple Then to Ebon soot of night

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  1. Date: 2/23/2013 9:34:00 AM

    An absolutely beautiful, carefully observed evocation of an ordinary event. I really enjoy writing that incorporates a rich palette of literal color. Fine writing; fine reading. Thanks. Jack

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 8:49:00 PM

    Hello David, a wonderful feeling when reading abut the sunset in this manner.. good poem..LINDA

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 4:45:00 PM

    A painter's palette in words. Nice work.