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Candle in the sky

A night of sorrow; I see so 
many stars 
but none so bright, a night so 
dark, no flashlight 
no compass no way to find my 
candle in the sky.
Today I lost you hiding in my 
blackest night,
alone with no guide. I'll 
remember you bright,
but your absent light will 
sorrow my everynight.
I lost the light of you in the 
night sky, 
not my dream of you so bright

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  1. Date: 2/15/2013 6:50:00 PM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup, if you need any help don't hesitate to ask. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 4:15:00 PM

    nice write Juan,welcome to the Soup,read write and enjoy

    ruvalcaba Avatar juan ruvalcaba Date: 2/10/2013 8:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks.