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Field of Vision

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Field of Vision

Gray stone stands
Against blue sky
Wisps of white
Where red hawks fly

Mingling colours
Painting eyes
Into these pictues
Poems rise

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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 10:28:00 AM
    love the visual aspects of this poem,,,

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:53:00 AM
    Mingling colors, great image. I loved your rhyme. happy Valentine's Day Caleb. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 10:22:00 PM
    Had to see this one again. "poems rise" is such an eloquent ending. Gotta fave it. and thanks so much for reading Cinder Girl.

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 11:24:00 AM
    Nice images! Terry

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 4:58:00 AM
    So colorful!

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  1. Date: 2/10/2013 11:41:00 PM
    I just love your imagery here. especially that first stanza. Full of color.

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 3:15:00 PM
    Isn't this so true....everything the simplest things inspire...beautiful

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 1:59:00 PM
    Caleb a painting with words. Nicely done rhyme. Warm Smiles, Connie