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Burning Embers

You walk in the crowd like a wayfaring stranger
and see not the sadness creased into my face.
Knowing as I do that my heart's in danger;
feeling forgotten in this human race.

River is rising as my love lies churning;
bruised and bewildered,my soul needs repair.
My hearth is filled up with your embers burning;
surely you'll heal me with your loving care.

Flying and circling now into my dreams;
by the silvery starlight you start to unfold me.
Capturing my heart as it's tossed on moonbeams;
taking my breath away as you just hold me.

The burning embers of love and desire
are stoked again as something here blooms.
More than mere ashes are left  from your fire;
morning will find here true love in these rooms.



written by Deb Wilson for Gail's contest "Burning Embers"

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 2:00:00 PM

    DEb, your poem is full of deep emotion and love, well done, and best of luck in the contest, constance

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 12:42:00 AM

    Hi congratulations Debs, a lovely write and well deserving of a winning spot... hoping for more time nest week for more reading and commenting xx

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 11:34:00 PM

    A great win, Deb. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 6:15:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning poem..

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 5:18:00 PM

    The embers that wouldn't die out...burst to flames !! Enjoyed the read and congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 5:10:00 PM

    Deb, congratulations! in Gail's "Burning Embers " contest.. a delightful burring poem.. always~ PD

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 5:07:00 PM

    Oh this is so beautiful Deb! Love this touching poem. Congratulations on your win in the contest!

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 4:04:00 PM

    Deb, congratulations on your second place win in my contest. You penned a beautiful heartfelt poem that I loved from beginning to end. Thank you. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:48:00 PM

    Dreamy.....good luck...

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 3:06:00 PM

    nice words Deb...Seren

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 1:05:00 PM

    ‡ One Day We Shall All Behold Our Greatest Truest Love, Sweet Beautiful Girl! ˜ I Love Your Unicorn's Lovely Photo As Also Your Beauty's Wonderful Heartfelt Passion Dipped Poetics Painting ˜ Made Myself For Some Reason Reflect Upon Nebuchadnezzar's Revelation Into Reality As He Returned Gratefully In Joyfully From The Wild And Proclaimed, 'The One As Only True God.' ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 1:00:00 PM

    This is a wonderfully delightful write my friend! I enjoyed reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What an intriguing and impressionable piece you have written Deb! Great Work!!