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Northern Light Angel

In twilight beneath the tapestries of stars
She silently pulled  on her slippers
To dance upon the earth's orb
Twinkling star dust with each step
She whirled around the heavens
Light followed in her foot steps
Each step illuminated the sky
The angel  created a  magical glow
The sky became vibrant shades
as she danced across the sky
Her unsurpassed beauty and inner glow
humbled my senses as she flowed
She left quickly and left me longing for more.

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  1. Date: 2/22/2013 3:37:00 AM

    Wonderful just so nice.

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 10:20:00 AM

    Dear Phyllis,Hope this finds You and Yours Healthy and High in the Spirit. The imagery is so clear, I can see the Angel dancing across the evening sky "She left quickly and left me longing for more" also. When I was young my grandpa took me to Canada to watch the "Northern Light Angel" dancing thru the night skys. Great Pen LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 9:30:00 AM

    Ease up with the cold weather.

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:35:00 AM

    I THINK THIS IS PURE CREATIVITY GOOD WORK MAM.

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 10:27:00 PM

    and I am seeing this one again. Write MORE, Phyllis. I know you can get so inspired by your beautiful landscape you tell us of in your poetry.

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 2:53:00 PM

    nicely writen.

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 6:58:00 PM

    Oh, I love this Phyllis ;} I wrote something like this, called night skies 1999,,, it's not posted, though . I really love your ;} thank you for reading Missing pieces ;} xx

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 11:36:00 PM

    oh, my , one of your sweetest poems yet, Phyllis. I love how you put an angel in the sky with those lights. showing such imagination. Luv,Andrea

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 3:55:00 PM

    This is so gorgeous. The imagery makes the reader find themselves in a scene of nostalgia. Thanks for sharing this gem. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 1:56:00 PM

    Phyllis your poem evokes whimsy and magical visions of surrealism. It challenges my imagination to believe. Warm Smiles Connie

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 12:56:00 PM

    A lovely view and lovely poem Phyllis. - Have you seen the Northern Lights? - North in Norway is much northern light, but it's far from where I live, I've never seen it in real life. -Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)