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My Valentine

silence among the stars
kissed my valentine
an endless secret

a secret of a genuineness
affection 
purer than a pearl
love
more delicate than a silk
sincerity
softer than a dew

no word
no one
could fathom the depth of love

only through 
nocturnal sweet fragrance heart
with the glorious nostagia soul
will sing a lovely ballad 
and breeze the lovely aroma
with its blossom

i often lend my ears 
to the fullest moon
wished it could whisper 
the softest love

i often lend my heart
to the music calling
wished it could take me 
to the passionate love

O my Valentine
wished you take me
to my gorgeous piece of love
and let me
live in its timeless tune

~sukmawati komala~
7 february 2013

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  1. Date: 4/9/2013 10:52:00 PM

    Dear Sukmawati, YOUR "Kimba" must be an amazing man for YOU to pen such Passionate POETRY.I Thank-YOU for sharing that Passion with the SOUP. YOU are an Amazing Addition to the Soup Family.Superb Quill. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:01:00 AM

    Passion-filled and lovely write, my dear friend, thnx for your visit!! Jag

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 12:02:00 AM

    this is just so sweet SK ;} you have a beautiful day ;}

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 4:37:00 PM

    Ahh yes, SK...I can feel the warmth and love you have for your soul-mate in this soothing yet passionate write...as I said before, he's a lucky guy!...Have a wonderful evening dear friend - Tim

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 7:38:00 AM

    Hello my dear poet friend, SK! This is a very beautiful and lovely masterpiece of yours. I love it so much! Thank you for sharing. By the way, would you mind if I ask you where are your other poems? You really write so well. I love your poems. Well, anyway I'm stopping by to especially greet you a very Happy Valentines Day! I wish you all the best on this special Heart's Day and always! I hope you're always doing great! Sending you my big sweetest hugs ! love always, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 6:15:00 AM

    Very passionate Valentine poem..Enjoyed reading this morn..My this be a great Valentine Day for you..Thanks for stopping by my work..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 11:30:00 PM

    Such a beautiful and passionate poem..In your words...The silk,the dew,the fragrance...The whole thing! :o) Just beautiful!~<3 Happy Valentines Day!~<3

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 6:50:00 PM

    ‡ And They Found Them There Thousands Of Years Later, Sweet Beautiful Girl, Lying Amid One Anothers Arms Aside Her Sea, Drenched In Love's Eternal Dew ˜ I Love Your Beautiful Poem And Surely I Shall, Favour It's Splendours ˜ Thank You, For Your Lovely Beauty's Kind Visit; 'Wonderful!' ˜ Happy Valentines Day ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 6:25:00 PM

    Ohh, so cute and lovely, Sukmawati. Happy Valentine's to you too :). Love ya, Toquyen

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 6:01:00 PM

    Lovely Valentine's poem! You really spread some beauties of love in this special day :D, happy Valentine's day too dear Sukmawati, thank you for your lovely visit today :D it's been a pleasure - hug, yanny

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 5:37:00 PM

    Wonderful valentine Poem expressed very sweetly. Thanks a lot for wishing me. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 8:02:00 AM

    Song of Love...

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 11:35:00 PM

    what a gorgeous valentine, sweetie. You always have such passion in your writing.