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Andrea Dietrich
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Eau de You
on my mind. . . on my sheets. . . your essence For the Ellip contest of .. Gigno
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kash poet
Date: 3/28/2013 1:13:00 PM
Just stopping by to say HI !
Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/9/2013 11:50:00 AM
'Tis intimate to the extreme! Great use of 8 tiny words to create an overall picture. I find it interesting that original Japanese haiku were all written in this fashion... one big line.
... Gigno
Date: 2/28/2013 8:35:00 PM
!!!
Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/25/2013 5:26:00 PM
o la la your mind is on the sheets lol. love phyl
Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/17/2013 2:09:00 AM
winning material, Andrea...
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/15/2013 8:05:00 PM
Hi, Andrea, i just seen my any poem will do contest is close.. love the extra work tonight...xoxPD
Heather Ober
Date: 2/15/2013 8:35:00 AM
I love how intimate this one is! What an interesting form.
jack horne
Date: 2/14/2013 1:12:00 PM
love this cever write, Andrea
HOLLY MOORE
Date: 2/13/2013 5:06:00 PM
Whoa momma! This should catch some attention. Thanks for reading and your comments..xx Holly
Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/13/2013 4:06:00 PM
Reads like a winner this passionate erotic work..Thanks for stopping by..The storm of which I was writing was 1963 and 1964..It lasted about three or four days and stayed on the ground about two weeks..It was the end of December and the first of January..I remember the storm of which you speak..It did not touch here but was in North Georgia and other states..We had a blizzard in 1993 in the month of March..We had winds of 65 miles an hour with snow..Sara
Frank Polgar
Date: 2/12/2013 3:26:00 PM
Great monoku!
daver austin
Date: 2/12/2013 12:19:00 PM
Add Valentine to this line. Just kidding. Interesting form. You nailed it. Love, daver
Joe Maverick
Date: 2/12/2013 10:04:00 AM
Well done again Andrea; like the style, wishing you a win with this.."
Debbie Duncan
Date: 2/12/2013 12:25:00 AM
WOW,,,,, I like this ,,,,,, I should start writing shorter ones like this,, thank you for reading my " missing pieces" I have a spiral 3 ring tablet that I had age 16, from the 70's haven't posted any of thoughs ;}
Rollo West
Date: 2/11/2013 5:37:00 PM
wow, my kind of Monoku Andrea, nice write. Rollo
Joseph May
Date: 2/11/2013 5:23:00 PM
nice monoku Andrea...hugs
Owen Yeates
Date: 2/11/2013 12:17:00 PM
Hi Andrea great as usual, good luck in the contest, though this seems like a winner to me, all the best Owen
Leonora Galinta
Date: 2/11/2013 8:17:00 AM
Hello again my dearest friend! I don't have any idea yet about this form of poem; but, reading yours is already an excellent and the perfect example for me. I think i can already write one next time ;). i hope so. A winner for sure. Good luck always! love/hugs, Leonora
David Williams
Date: 2/11/2013 8:01:00 AM
Andrea very good.....glad you spotted it...David
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/10/2013 11:58:00 PM
Wow... the smell...this one is terrific. ..goodnight Andrea. ..xox..pd
robert johnson
Date: 2/10/2013 3:01:00 PM
Eau, how sweet! :)
ilene bauer
Date: 2/10/2013 2:06:00 PM
love the title (and the poem, too!)
harry horsman
Date: 2/10/2013 2:05:00 PM
amazing Andrea, this is surly a winner...
Russell Sivey
Date: 2/10/2013 12:09:00 PM
This is perfect! You have masterfully created a Monoku for this Ellip contest! You're so clever to use the Monoku for this contest, quite effective! This is a very good one too, I just love the feel and the message you bring, very awesome! Great Work!!
yasmin khan
Date: 2/10/2013 11:26:00 AM
woow Andrea..now that sets my imagination on fire..great monoku...how are you and Joe?? sorry Andrea..been so busy but missed talking to you..
Caleb Smith
Date: 2/10/2013 11:00:00 AM
ooooo...Just love this sensual little jag!
Kim Merryman
Date: 2/10/2013 10:23:00 AM
An excellent monoku, Andrea! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/10/2013 1:29:00 AM
Beautiful... good luck in the contest ^______^ Always, Laura
Rachel St.Cross
Date: 2/10/2013 12:09:00 AM
‡ Short Sweet And Beyound Beautiful! ˜ Yet One's Heart Would Guess As To Imagine, Sweet Beautiful Priceless, Andrea ˜ That Merely Left With Your Love's Essence, Would Count The Clock's Hand Slow, As Waiting Once More For, Their Kiss ˜ But, Again, This Is A Very Beautiful Valentine's Poetic Kiss; Extremely As Enchantingly So ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *
kash poet
Date: 2/10/2013 12:01:00 AM
So I can write a Monoku!Good one.
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