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I Smiled

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I Smiled

Days to night
Nights to day

Flowers Bloom
And petals fall

The sun does rise
As the monsoons fall

Twists and turns
the roads we travel

I smiled
The mysteries unraveled

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  1. Date: 3/14/2013 7:07:00 PM
    A nice easy flow with some sweet imagery, culminating in a cool rhyme! BRAVO Arthur!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 4:13:00 AM
    Love whimsical little verses like this. Nicely done.

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:44:00 AM
    The mysteries of life are often sort, but when are known, not what you thought. ...Seren

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 11:46:00 PM
    Excellent, very nice!!!

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 7:34:00 PM
    Very unique! I really like this a lot! Nicely done, I enjoyed stopping by to read it :) Hugs!

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    Date: 2/14/2013 9:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thnak you so much, I enjoyed many of yours as well!
  1. Date: 2/10/2013 7:54:00 AM
    keep smiling to eaxh mystery of life..Its nice to live and breathe.

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 11:23:00 PM
    Nice read ... Seren