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  1. Date: 7/19/2013 1:16:00 PM
    interesting piece. I like it

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 6:02:00 AM
    Powerful compassionate fantastic write! :)

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 9:13:00 PM
    WOW! This is amazing, seriously. A perfect entry for the contest!

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 10:24:00 AM
    Smh...dang this is awesome write...can't wait to see the end result of the contest..Excellent!! You have a powerful pen!!

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 5:41:00 AM
    So cute, love it Marlon .... Hope you had a romantic Valentine's day. - - Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 4:49:00 PM
    I've been there too Marlon and remember nothing of the five years I lost. Sometimes life gives tough things to handle. I visited your blog and left a comment, hope it puts your fears to rest. Love, Lizziy

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 2:57:00 PM
    Scribe, an outstanding write my friend, very eloquent...David

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 6:27:00 PM
    My Dear Marlon, I admire you for your talent and great gift of love and compassion. She was blessed with such a great son, her mind might by foggy, but her heart, it never forgets you, her precious son, Happy Valentine's Day With love, from me to you xxx

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 6:51:00 AM
    amazing poetry Marlon,,,Is this your mother, or grandmother??

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 9:06:00 PM
    Scribe, a women of secret and pride.. Your poem is beautiful. A sad feeling when I read the poem. however, the prayer of serenity, helps picture the images with an ending comfort... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 10:48:00 AM
    Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were very uplifting..This is an interesting work.Not sure of its true interpertation though.Enjoyed reading today..Sara

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 1:30:00 PM
    A highly respectable tribute to a Divine source of inspiration Scribe - warriors want battles Scribe, thats the beauty of their penchants - we are sad without fight! I like the 'sand glass' reference, very poignant - a great use of historical context too - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 8:44:00 PM
    I am glad to be able to return and read such thought prevoking, pure genius-like pieces today...Beautiful Scribe

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 12:07:00 AM
    Love this Scribe!Beautifully written.

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 4:30:00 PM
    This moved me to tears...wonderful

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 4:13:00 PM
    All for one or not at all...we all bleed the same the colour, we all cry the same tears, we all pray whether openly or secretly, we are all one!....David

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 1:39:00 PM
    A beautiful poem for your mother. God Bless her. And you too. Hugs, Catie :)