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The Soup Line

The Soup Line

Freezing cold, shivering soul
Logs on for nourishment.
The menu has 200 simmering
At all times
Delicacies for the mental taste bud
Alphabet herbs n spices
Imported...fresh on a daily

Bitter broth made from trespasses
Bouillon Cubes
With the zest of, not knowing when triumphant
So it just simmers for a life time
With those components floating atop

The Creme of Love
Has a bittersweet aftertaste
While warm, it soothes and goes down
Smoothly
As the creme gets cold, it curds like cottage cheese
The size of tennis balls retaining the bland-ness
Decreasing this gifts value...So I rarely order it

Stew of enlightenment
Has these Lil lights like pearl onions
You gravitate towards
When bitten a revelation open up the senses
Like Wasabi, but sweet as a hint of ginger
Designed to stick to your ribs

Oooohwee
The hearty metaphoric chowder!
Is hallucinogenic based, where the aroma
Contains imagery sauteed in brilliance
Provided with bread for sopping its true meaning

The Gumbo Soul Poets
Who's not afraid to mix it up
With the Sassafras Leaves that make up the File
Making a rare Rue
That all cannot comprehend its distinction
I know over-adding this spice it gels
And has an unbearable gritty with each bite
Only consumed by like minded connoisseur's

The soup line is for all walks of life!
Here's a free bowl of an poetic elixir

Scribe Marlon Linton

My gratitude for including me in the Top 100 Poems!
It is appreciated as fuel...

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  1. Date: 4/30/2013 3:34:00 PM

    Hello Scribe, i read your comment on Craig's blog.... and what happened this morning, she had a comment that used my name 3 times..I asked her to remove it..... politely through soup mail... and guess what she did... she posted my soup mail, on her blog... I called her every name in the book. I was mad and outraged... violated... the confidence in soup mail was breached. I hate what she did.... but then again,,, that is what she does, she loves exposing poets.... but, she crossed the line with me. I am glad you missed that very ugly blog i posted for her.... Sorry, my behavior made heads spin around here... xox~

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 9:53:00 AM

    This is wonderful. Your poetry deserves to be waaaaay at the top of the Soup list. :)

    ML Avatar SCRIBE ML Date: 3/31/2013 10:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That moves me beyond words...Thanks!
  1. Date: 3/15/2013 5:44:00 PM

    Sorry for the long over due disappearance This soup line, is superb, my dear fam' love it.... Xoxox Love always Carma

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 10:20:00 AM

    Love it fam!!!!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 9:52:00 PM

    Hello Scribe, stopping by to say hi... and good night.. I will be back tomorrow.. to re-read your poem... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 6:45:00 AM

    the soup line, a mixture of soul baring and heartfeeling poets, the menu various, and i particular like the taste of the soup right now!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 1:38:00 PM

    I like the way you demonstrate your appreciation Scribe - this write manifest a fantastic display of imagination - my expectations for you do not know the direction backwards - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 9:08:00 AM

    Great work..You have a great knowledge of foods or soups..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 1:44:00 AM

    Hey Scribe,all these food refrences kind of got me hungry...I could almost tase these things as I read. A very delicious poem,with such a true inner meaning. :o)

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 4:39:00 AM

    tHIS IS ALL SO GOOD. gREAT sOUT FOR THE SOUL. cONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR BEING ONE OF THE 100. hAVE A GREAT DAY. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 5:10:00 PM

    Wow magnifico!!!!!!

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 12:48:00 PM

    Scribe superb write....David