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Who Am I, Really

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Who Am I, Really

Could I have always been wrong about me?
I don't think I even know who I am anymore
I don't have the strength to fix myself
There's a three-foot deep glass door
Infront of me and my reflection
But the inside and out, don't match
So I can't tell if it's really me
And I'm not really much of a catch
The only thing I can do is this
But in battle I lost my own game
I wasn't humbled, just remorse
Trying, fumbling for my own name
I think I've always been wrong about me
I don't really know who I am
I don't know that I ever did
But I hope that one day I can

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  1. Date: 5/16/2013 1:28:00 PM
    Amazing write, really throws your mind in a thousand directions thinking where's going next, really superb. Have a blessed day, Gordon

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 2:57:00 PM
    I don't know JULI, but i like this poem. It defines a lot of lines, in me.Thank you for sharing. I'll be back later on tonight if not on my next day off. How about naming a particular poem, on your list. I can't wait to read the poem you highly recommend. Take Care and have yourself a nice day. LUV* ~SKAT

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 1:15:00 PM
    Magnificent!

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 3:30:00 PM
    You are a spiritual being having a physical experience . Rod Mckuen once wrote if I don't know who I am maybe I can go back and find out who I was. I gave up that quest . I live in the moment and ask not who am I,but what can do for myself and others. It is a lot more fun that way and also rewarding,your freind michael

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 8:16:00 AM
    This is a marvelous poem! :) I can relate to this particular poem... I can't believe im the first one to comment on this poem! YAY! xD I sometimes wonder if I'm wrong about me. . . this poem allows me to think lots. I hope you have a superb week!