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Long Focus Lens

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Below is the poem entitled Long Focus Lens which was written by poet Annie Lander. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Long Focus Lens

I knew, that if you knew that I was watching
Your thoughts of me would never be the same
The sexual approach as you hugs and 
caresses her silicone enchancers
         So tightly,
You feast upon her, sweetness 
That moaning sound, the bulging purple blood;
       Surges in your veins 

You close your eyes, and you sigh “Oh my God”
words, I never heard like that before
You seem at ease with the whore

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  1. Date: 2/8/2013 5:50:00 PM
    damn guy. haha

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 5:49:00 PM
    wow, this is GOOD. I really LIKES it!!

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 6:48:00 PM
    Very well written and all that comes to mind is what they don't know doesn't hurt them right.....maybe?????they should have closed the blinds!!!

    Lander Avatar Annie Lander
    Date: 2/8/2013 7:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you DonnaJones..
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 2:40:00 PM
    A little dirty and very moving. Poetry as a form of art should move people, this is successful on many levels. A little shocker at the end is the icing on the cake. Well done.

    Lander Avatar Annie Lander
    Date: 2/7/2013 3:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I should have mention.. a little Extreme Adult only
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 2:24:00 PM
    omg this is really good and so intense...do I sense some anger? lol ! very good..luv,Deb

    Lander Avatar Annie Lander
    Date: 2/7/2013 2:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No angry, just having fun with my wild imagination
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 2:09:00 PM
    this is matured and mind thrilling love the expression and the emotion it is always personal

    Lander Avatar Annie Lander
    Date: 2/7/2013 2:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much for the feedback on this piece....I tried my best not to make it seem.. dirty with my words... blessed