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Time to say goodbye my love

My chain is now frail
Damaged by your weaken link 

My venture begins 
Left with simple forgiveness 

Unwarranted departure. 

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  1. Date: 2/16/2013 3:07:00 AM

    A clever poem indeed. It seems like a return to form. Nice work.

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 7:58:00 PM

    At least you weren't with the Missin Link. *lol* sorry I couldn't resist. Forgive me Dark Mistress. I enjoyed your Tanka!

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 1:23:00 PM

    thats got a sting to it...i like it very much!

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 12:13:00 PM

    Mistress good tanka, though why number them?...David