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To Paradise Come

To paradise come; chase your blues away! Pure pleasure resides at my favorite place. Where sand and sea sparkle and palm trees sway - to paradise come. Chase your blues away. Just play and jump waves. Stay all of the day - warm breezes and sun caressing your face. To paradise come; chase your blues away. Pure pleasure resides at my favorite place! Written 2/5/13 for the Chasing the Blues Away Contest of Becca Lucas

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  1. Date: 3/1/2013 10:22:00 AM

    yes need to chase away those blues in the sun. Lovely poem. love phyl

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:26:00 PM

    Well I want to go to your paradise,,, I think like this when I look at one of those travel magazines,,, you have an awesome day Andrea ;}

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:19:00 PM

    You can chase away my winter blues. Sound lovely. love phyl

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 2:37:00 PM

    Sounds wonderful....congratulations!

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 11:43:00 AM

    Andrea you make it sound so inviting...David

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:16:00 PM

    Yes, with a Corona and a slice of lime! A good place to be any day! RAY

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 1:18:00 PM

    sounds like a wonderful place indeed. Congrats on your wins, by the way, my friend

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 3:24:00 PM

    Hey, where's this place? I have been looking all my life. Very upbeat poem. I like it.

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 5:10:00 PM

    Andrea, are you sure you didn't just visit my home without telling me? Loved this breezy winning poem. You must be magic the way you are able to enter so many contests and still have a life. I sure can't keep up, but would like to. Kudos on this win! Love, Lotus

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 5:27:00 PM

    congrats on your win Andrea

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 2:00:00 PM

    Oh, I love this one! I'm going to keep it on hand for the next time I'm feeling low :) A very well deserving win!

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 11:55:00 AM

    a simple winning sweep Andrea, loved this one ....thanks for sharing and congrats...

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 11:27:00 AM

    Congrats Andrea on you win. If I were there, I know my blues would be chaises away. Cold and windy where I'm from. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 10:53:00 AM

    Big congratulations again my dearest friend! love/hugs, LG

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 10:09:00 AM

    Many Congrats Andy xx

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 9:18:00 AM

    Andrea, a nice winning poem... Congratulations with your "Chasing the Blues Away" entry... Have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 8:48:00 AM

    Andrea! :) I was happy to see your name come up on this poem.. congratulations on your win. I love this one, it really resonates with me because the ocean is my favorite place to be and I always feel the happiest when I'm there. Also, it is just a very nice, well-written poem :)

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 5:33:00 PM

    Oh yeah...Im a fan of sunshine and beaches. You make me want to be there! Nice one, Andrea.

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 8:41:00 AM

    Another good one. Sounds real happy there. To answer your question, I have never even been to England, but I like reading some types of older British books. I would like to visit the island someday.

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 4:20:00 AM

    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this morning..Great line to use as the repeat line..Good luck..Thanks for stopping by..Scales don't lie and I have got to start getting more exercise so the weight won't pile up..Sara

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 4:30:00 PM

    Thinking is the best way to travel. That's a Moody Blues line. Sweet!

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 8:31:00 AM

    A beautiful Triolet by you here Andrea.I love your approach.Good use of this form.

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 7:23:00 AM

    Your favorite place must be Shangri La. Lots of motion in this one, Andrea. Makes me want to go to the seashore - well, maybe just Lake Michigan. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 6:51:00 AM

    you have issued, when do i pack my bags, and do i need a tent? seriously Andrea this is right up there with your best... love your poetry...

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 5:13:00 AM

    It's going to be a long line ....... now I stand in last ..... wait for me. - Well written, good luck in the contest Andrea. - - Have a lovely day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 3:02:00 AM

    When do we go? Sounds like a nice place to be. Your paradise. I can use the sun and the play. A great image with your words. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:25:00 PM

    Love the poem, Andrea... I'm liking the image and paradise in your poem...um! i think i will stay and invade your paradise with loud music... LOL....JK... this reminds me of a commercial were a couple sits under a swaying palm tree... and then a lady is waiting on them... a pleasurable poem..good luck in the contest..PD

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 5:36:00 PM

    Sorry john and anyone else wondering. I can't send tickets. haha. I can't even afford to go there myself but the one time I took a cruise in the Bahamas, it was the best vacation of my life.

    A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/6/2013 7:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ps...... about your question, on my hair ** no, i did not color my hair... i have highlights... but this week I'm going red... ha ha..JK... i think what your seeing in my picture is my hair tucked behind my ears... very cute hu... lol.. and thank you so much for the compliment.. always~ LINDA
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 4:51:00 PM

    send tickets.

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 4:47:00 PM

    This is a very good Triolet Andrea! You have pleased me completely with the tenderness and beauty of this poem! What a terrific piece my friend, Great Work!!

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