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The Super Pill

What would a Pill of Life do for me?
Will it give me an everlasting life?
Will I then acquire a sense
of supreme consciousness?
Or maybe eternal youth?
Will I then be always free and happy,
While my kith and kin are miserable
and die of sickness and old age?
Will it give me eternal salvation?
Will I then understand the 
workings of the Natural Laws?
Or, will it condemn me to eternal damnation?

Nah, I rather chug along my course of destiny,
Swallowing wistfully the bitter pill of life!


Contest: Pill of Life
02/05/13

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 1:07:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win...David

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:49:00 PM

    Abdul, wow...some pill you indulge and swallowed... an excellent winning poem..pd

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:20:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 1:00:00 PM

    Very interesting approach to the contest..Enjoyed readingyour winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 11:33:00 AM

    Ah, I see you understand the risks, too, Abdul. Nice work. Congratulations! Cheers, Roy

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 10:03:00 AM

    Many congratulations Abdul xx

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 10:13:00 PM

    Congratulations Abdul..

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 7:39:00 PM

    Congratulations Abdul .....Seren

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 7:26:00 PM

    Congrats Abdul on your 1st place win xxx

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 6:57:00 PM

    oh I see my first comment to you is right beneath my congratulations. I had not wavered in my opinion at all!!

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 6:56:00 PM

    YOurs is so awesome it makes me hate the one I did. haha. Congrats on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 11:29:00 PM

    wow, this is one of the BEST I have seen in the contest. MUCH better than mine and I fully expect to see it near the top of the list!!!

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 8:40:00 AM

    ha ha ha! love your ending :) and you ask a lot of good questions! good luck in the contest :)

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:32:00 PM

    Hi Abdul, i think i agree with you on the ending... a good poem and entry.. good luck in the contest..LINDA