Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

The Super Pill

Abdul Malik Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled The Super Pill which was written by poet Abdul Malik. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Abdul Malik

Best Abdul Malik Poems

+ Fav Poet

The Super Pill

What would a Pill of Life do for me?
Will it give me an everlasting life?
Will I then acquire a sense
of supreme consciousness?
Or maybe eternal youth?
Will I then be always free and happy,
While my kith and kin are miserable
and die of sickness and old age?
Will it give me eternal salvation?
Will I then understand the 
workings of the Natural Laws?
Or, will it condemn me to eternal damnation?

Nah, I rather chug along my course of destiny,
Swallowing wistfully the bitter pill of life!


Contest: Pill of Life
02/05/13

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 1:07:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win...David

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:49:00 PM
    Abdul, wow...some pill you indulge and swallowed... an excellent winning poem..pd

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:20:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 1:00:00 PM
    Very interesting approach to the contest..Enjoyed readingyour winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 11:33:00 AM
    Ah, I see you understand the risks, too, Abdul. Nice work. Congratulations! Cheers, Roy

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 10:03:00 AM
    Many congratulations Abdul xx

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 10:13:00 PM
    Congratulations Abdul..

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 7:39:00 PM
    Congratulations Abdul .....Seren

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 7:26:00 PM
    Congrats Abdul on your 1st place win xxx

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 6:57:00 PM
    oh I see my first comment to you is right beneath my congratulations. I had not wavered in my opinion at all!!

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 6:56:00 PM
    YOurs is so awesome it makes me hate the one I did. haha. Congrats on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 11:29:00 PM
    wow, this is one of the BEST I have seen in the contest. MUCH better than mine and I fully expect to see it near the top of the list!!!

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 8:40:00 AM
    ha ha ha! love your ending :) and you ask a lot of good questions! good luck in the contest :)

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:32:00 PM
    Hi Abdul, i think i agree with you on the ending... a good poem and entry.. good luck in the contest..LINDA