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EYES ON FISH

                                                           fisher man
                                                  fishing creel in hands
                                                        stuck with mud 

                                                         crane near by
                                                  jumps here and there
                                                           eyes on fish

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  1. Date: 2/16/2013 8:32:00 PM

    this is really cute. The man and the crane both waiting on that fish!!

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 4:23:00 AM

    amazing picture your haiku creates

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:09:00 PM

    Enjoyed your haiku, BL! Good work. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:11:00 PM

    BL, i can imagine everyone ready for the perfect catch... good haikus....PD

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 1:31:00 PM

    Fish eyes ......... watery .... lifeless eyes, nasty ..... lol. - Well done bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)