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Lover's Joy

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Lover's Joy

in a hotel room
i free both my heart and past
inhibitions lost.

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  1. Date: 2/20/2013 9:51:00 AM

    an original and succinct take on the theme, leaves the reader with a few questions which is never a bad thing, congrats on your win! :)

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 8:56:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Harry! :D - hug, yanny

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:36:00 AM

    Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:40:00 PM

    So glad to see it on the list!!! Congrats, my friend!!

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 5:12:00 PM

    If only walls could talk. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 4:59:00 PM

    Congratulations on a very fine win, Harry! Annalise

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 4:16:00 PM

    Miss you already Harry, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 12:42:00 PM

    congrats on your win Harry

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:10:00 AM

    Big congratulations harry, love this one xx

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 7:42:00 AM

    Harry congrats on your win. A great Senryu. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 7:37:00 PM

    Lovely versing...Freedom brings on a spoem for sure. Cynthia

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 6:40:00 PM

    speaking of this hotel room, this is what I had in mind with my beach poem, NOT a tent. hahaha

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 12:15:00 PM

    WOW. This is wonderful! I agree with the rest of the comments. You seem to be quite the master of Senryu. Great job! :)

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 5:34:00 AM

    hi soup mail

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 2:29:00 AM

    Oh wow, this is awesome!!! Excellent imagery!!!

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 1:34:00 AM

    Hi Harry great senryu, speaking a thousand words, have a good day my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 9:10:00 PM

    You've written a story in three short lines, Harry! Great job! Always, Annalise P.S. This must be for the contest...my best wishes for the Winners' Circle.

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 8:33:00 PM

    Nice one Harry......Seren

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 4:16:00 PM

    I love the senryu Harry, i am lost with the image... always~ PD

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:47:00 PM

    Wow!! This is remarkable. Very powerful in extreme emotion. Best wishes. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:07:00 PM

    GOOD one nice content //no period Harry ;) and you can do a capital [I] //Soupie mail on our project Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:02:00 PM

    What a clever way to do this contest and WELL done too!!

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:41:00 PM

    Interesting work..A very magical hotel room..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 1:33:00 PM

    yes, I agree with Joann - love this one, Harry

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:43:00 PM

    So glad i was able to read your senryu today. So much in a few words.

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 11:41:00 AM

    Hi! friend, yours lovely one enjoyed. A magic of few words. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 11:21:00 AM

    Ya gotta love those hotel rooms but watch out... those walls are paper thin! LOL

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 11:16:00 AM

    Hmmmm. Sets the mind to wondering exactly who you are there with. Loved it.

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:13:00 AM

    I'm with Becca here, its a wow and it speaks volumes xx