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About This Poem

Lover's Joy

in a hotel room
i free both my heart and past
inhibitions lost.

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  1. Puddifoot Avatar
    Charlotte Puddifoot
    Date: 2/20/2013 9:51:00 AM
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    an original and succinct take on the theme, leaves the reader with a few questions which is never a bad thing, congrats on your win! :)
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    Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 2/20/2013 8:56:00 AM
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    Congrats on your win Harry! :D - hug, yanny
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/20/2013 1:36:00 AM
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    Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/19/2013 8:40:00 PM
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    So glad to see it on the list!!! Congrats, my friend!!
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 2/19/2013 5:12:00 PM
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    If only walls could talk. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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    Annalise Brigham
    Date: 2/19/2013 4:59:00 PM
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    Congratulations on a very fine win, Harry! Annalise
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 2/19/2013 4:16:00 PM
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    Miss you already Harry, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD
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    Joseph May
    Date: 2/19/2013 12:42:00 PM
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    congrats on your win Harry
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 2/19/2013 8:10:00 AM
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    Big congratulations harry, love this one xx
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    Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 2/19/2013 7:42:00 AM
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    Harry congrats on your win. A great Senryu. Warm Smiles, Connie
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    Cynthia Alvez
    Date: 2/8/2013 7:37:00 PM
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    Lovely versing...Freedom brings on a spoem for sure. Cynthia
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    SCRIBE ML
    Date: 2/8/2013 11:50:00 AM
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    : ) I'm delighted to know you got your monies worth Harry..i think I'm overdue Mr. Marksman! Thanks for the continuous support and inspirational comments. For me it's fuel poet, hopefully I serve the same purpose for a gifted poet as yourself...KEEP BURNING!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/7/2013 6:40:00 PM
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    speaking of this hotel room, this is what I had in mind with my beach poem, NOT a tent. hahaha
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    Heather Ober
    Date: 2/7/2013 12:15:00 PM
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    WOW. This is wonderful! I agree with the rest of the comments. You seem to be quite the master of Senryu. Great job! :)
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    Becca Lucas
    Date: 2/7/2013 6:27:00 AM
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    Revisiting this one.... I often wish I could learn to write like this... I'm way to verbose sometimes, and its a great talent to use just a few words to present a clear image. Have a wonderful day Harry :)
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 2/7/2013 5:34:00 AM
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    hi soup mail
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    Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 2/7/2013 2:29:00 AM
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    Oh wow, this is awesome!!! Excellent imagery!!!
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    Owen Yeates
    Date: 2/7/2013 1:34:00 AM
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    Hi Harry great senryu, speaking a thousand words, have a good day my friend, all the best Owen
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    Annalise Brigham
    Date: 2/6/2013 9:10:00 PM
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    You've written a story in three short lines, Harry! Great job! Always, Annalise P.S. This must be for the contest...my best wishes for the Winners' Circle.
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    Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/6/2013 8:33:00 PM
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    Nice one Harry......Seren
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 2/6/2013 4:16:00 PM
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    I love the senryu Harry, i am lost with the image... always~ PD
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    Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 2/6/2013 3:47:00 PM
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    Wow!! This is remarkable. Very powerful in extreme emotion. Best wishes. Hugs and luv, Gail
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 2/6/2013 3:07:00 PM
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    GOOD one nice content //no period Harry ;) and you can do a capital [I] //Soupie mail on our project Light & Love
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/6/2013 3:02:00 PM
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    What a clever way to do this contest and WELL done too!!
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 2/6/2013 2:41:00 PM
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    Interesting work..A very magical hotel room..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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    jack horne
    Date: 2/6/2013 1:33:00 PM
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    yes, I agree with Joann - love this one, Harry
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 2/6/2013 12:43:00 PM
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    So glad i was able to read your senryu today. So much in a few words.
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    bl devnath
    Date: 2/6/2013 11:41:00 AM
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    Hi! friend, yours lovely one enjoyed. A magic of few words. Loved always, bl
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    Jack Ellison
    Date: 2/6/2013 11:21:00 AM
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    Ya gotta love those hotel rooms but watch out... those walls are paper thin! LOL
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    Anthony Nutter
    Date: 2/6/2013 11:16:00 AM
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    Hmmmm. Sets the mind to wondering exactly who you are there with. Loved it.
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