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mocking bird

a mocking bird sits atop sticky holly tree.. winter day spring nest silvery fog wraps around pines.. mocking bird flies Fog creeps through the woods wrapping around the pines obstructing the view. Gap in the cedars reveals a silvery shawl which is stopped by the bright sun on this side of the hedge or is it from a distance silvery on this side of hedge to those who view from afar?
Unfinished

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  1. Date: 2/6/2013 4:21:00 PM

    Sara, a lovely and beautiful image... love all your haiku...pd

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 1:50:00 PM

    love this one, Sara - love the picture you've painted here

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:08:00 PM

    Nice visuals. You could take this one to great heights.

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:37:00 AM

    is this for a contest i wonder,, unfinished looking good, Sara