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Funny Bunnies



Two funny little bunny rabbits One chasing after the other Mister had one thing on his mind Miss Bunny had her druthers All around the juniper tree They scurried up a storm Oblivious to the big bad wolf Who was lurking in the corn Wolfie jumped out and chased them Soon forgot about their game More concerned about surviving To be eaten would be a shame All bunnies are quick little devils As they hippity hop around Old Wolfie pal got out of breath And had to go lie down Bunnies are really nice little guys Gathered leaves for Wolfie's head He soon forgot about eating them And nobody wound up dead! © Jack Ellison 2013

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  1. Date: 2/6/2013 9:25:00 PM

    Oh, I love this Jack! The whole poem but especially the ending. Love it. Always, Annalise

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 2/7/2013 5:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I had to make it a happy ending... because hopefully it will be one of the poems for a possible children's picture book I'm planning! Your are sweet, dear Annalise... thanks oodles! xoxox
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 8:15:00 PM

    HA Jack, you sure know how to pack a smile... hope no bunnies were hurt during the making of this poem... enjoyed~ LINDA

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 2/7/2013 5:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No bunnies were hurt!! Thank you sweet lady... big big huggeroonies!
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:11:00 PM

    awww, you made this such a sweet one with them giving leaves for his head and nobody getting hurt. You must be a sweetie pie!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 2/7/2013 5:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I AM... butterscotch I think! LOL You must be a sweetie pie too!
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 1:36:00 PM

    Yay! No one's dead! This is another one of your hilarious writes my friend! I love reading these clever little poems of yours, i could read them all day! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 2/7/2013 5:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Russell, my good friend! Have a super day!!
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:41:00 PM

    this sounds like a song. Great poem, love the little bunnies and wolfie. I can see that you have earned the title'Quatrain King'.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 2/7/2013 5:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thinking of a kiddie's picture book. Hugs from the "Quatrain King" LOL
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 9:28:00 AM

    We had a bunny population explosion here in kelowna, the result of a couple of domestic bunnies set free. It created a lot of controversy when the culled them. I felt bad for the little bunnies. All that hopping about eventually led to their demise. I much prefer your happy tale.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 2/7/2013 5:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Don't let those little buggers loose... they love making love! Sad to hear it lead to their demise... us humans eh grrrrr!
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 8:09:00 AM

    It's all about the chase lol. Those must be some waskaly wabbits lo, nice write Jack.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 2/6/2013 8:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    "waskaly wabbits"... so you're a fan of Elmer too! LOL Thanks Wayland... cheers, Jack
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:47:00 AM

    Mice and rabbits... These are soo cute... I raised two rabbits named them Coffee Cup and Sammy Pie... We let Miss Coffee Cup go and the neighbors had fun watching and feeding her for years... Sammy Pie lived in the house and was potty trained... When I got married he he'd jump on the dresser and throw my Hubby's belt and wallet off the dresser every night... Jealous tike! ROLF! He really did... They became best buds after daily handfuls of clover. The way to a boy bunny is through his stomach.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 2/6/2013 8:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    "Coffee Cup and Sammy Pie"... only my dear Carol Eastman would come up with such sweet charming names like that!!! Love your story... big big bunny hugs! xoxoxox
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 6:59:00 AM

    very beautiful write :)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 2/6/2013 8:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are very kind my good friend... thank you!