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The Organic Pill Of Life

Take off your makeup
Kick off your shoes
Don't worry about your fancy hairdo

Spread out a blanket
Over green green grass
Watch all the busy people and traffic pass

Soak up the sunshine
Breath in the clean air
Close your eyes, forget today's strife
With every heartbeat take the organic pill of life

You can take this pill with you where ever you go
You can take it anytime and no one will know
Won't make you go crazy or loose your mind
It'll just make you smile and to others be kind

©Donna Jones

For the Pill of Life Contest, 2-28-2013

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:48:00 PM

    Donna, i want this pill... this is the kind of pill reality needs... an excellent win~ LINDA

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/26/2013 5:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Come on over and I'll give ya one...you can sit in my living room and watch the black cows across the street walking around in the snow..it looks like a giant domino! Have a good evening
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:20:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/25/2013 10:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Debbie :-)
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 1:23:00 PM

    Donna congrats on your win. Well deserved. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/24/2013 4:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-) thank you
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 12:58:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/24/2013 4:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-) thank you
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 11:31:00 AM

    Hey, Donna! I think I had one of those back in the 60's! Congratulations! Cheers, Roy

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/24/2013 4:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yeah they called it flower power. :-) :-) :-) thanks Roy
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 10:03:00 AM

    Many congratulations Donna luv xx

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/24/2013 4:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-) thanks so much
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:45:00 AM

    Got any of those on you by any chance?...Congratulations my friend...well deserved! - Tim

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/24/2013 4:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yeah.....called a fishing pole...today anyway....thanks tim
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 7:37:00 PM

    Well done Donna, ....Seren

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/23/2013 9:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-) thanks Seren
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 7:25:00 PM

    Congrats Donna on your 1st place win great poem xxx

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/23/2013 9:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I appreciate that Ms Rose....really...thanks
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 6:56:00 PM

    I LOVE yours . So cleverly done. BIG congrats to you.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/23/2013 7:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Andrea....thanks....
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:20:00 PM

    !!!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/6/2013 7:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-)
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 11:14:00 AM

    I will take off my makeup, kick off my shoes, BUT I'm keeping my fancy hairdo! LOL A great lesson for a peaceful gentle existence... UPBEAT as old hell! Love and hugs, Jack xoxox One question... can I take it without water?

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/6/2013 4:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And a nice hairdo indeed!
    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/6/2013 4:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Beverage of your choice!!!!!! Thanks for stopping by...and reading my sillyyyyyyy poem
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:41:00 AM

    oh such positivity,, this is a gem Donna,, how the world would be a better place, if this was our pill of life...lovely poetry

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/6/2013 4:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ah....thanks...sitting on the river bank fishing or hiking in the woods works better than tylenol for me!
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:40:00 AM

    ‡ Hey Girl, I Don't Believe I Have Told Your Beauty Yet, How Very Beautiful You Are, Sweet Beautiful Donna ˜ Aside From This Absolute Truth, I Love The Joyful Inspiration I Find Amid Your Wonders Creation In Poe ˜ 'Organic;' Anything Aside The Poisoned Pills, Shall Do For Myself, Well, If It Be But 'A Pill Of Beautiful Love!' ˜ Thank You For Your Treasures Kind Visit; 'Quite Wonderful' ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/6/2013 4:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your sweet words again inspire others. Thank you Rachel