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  1. Date: 4/15/2013 6:03:00 PM

    hey sweetie, Mixing of the Bones was one of your faves for me in case you never entered my contest yet. Just to let you know! Luv,Andrea

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:59:00 PM

    Beautiful poem. For someone who lost so much of her soul you don't seem to be missing any at all.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/1/2013 10:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well people learn to become pretty good actors if you will.. we can't dwell on what has disappointed us we must face each new day looking for a way to find joy in it. And go on,,,blessings and thanks for reading my poem
  1. Date: 2/9/2013 6:18:00 AM

    Thank you for your kind comment on my poem...a night alone. I love "bits of my soul", I understand bits of my soul. I don't post or participate on here much because time does not always allow. However, I will now look to read more of your poems having read this excellent, emotionally driven write. Take care x

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/9/2013 9:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for understanding Paul. I try to write a mixture of happy and my real life experiences. Look forward to visiting with you from time to time.
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:29:00 PM

    They shall come on the wind...To once again make you feel whole...Release the grudges from within...Of the darkened past that you hold...They keep you in surender...Like chains around your heart...The only way to break those chains...Is when forgiveness plays its part... :o) A very heartfelt write you have here Donna.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/6/2013 4:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much and you write it much better than I do, but thanks..yes forgiving yourself is the hardest thing to do. Blessings.
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:48:00 PM

    Such a beautifully haunting poem. thank you for sharing this poem.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/6/2013 4:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for stopping by to read it. Happiness always
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 9:30:00 AM

    how does fate get it all wrong,, beautiful poetry lost love does create,, and this is no exception.. yes Donna you write amazing poetry,, just hope you have happiness...i'm sure you do...

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/6/2013 4:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well thank you...finding happiness in everyday small things is what I have. Love of family and God. I wonder if we got it wrong or it was fate? Thanks again...
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 6:55:00 AM

    Well penned Donna! In life events occur wherein one feels they have given a part of themselves - it's when the feeling becomes overwhelming that we start to wonder about the way we live. You've said it very well.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/6/2013 4:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes Vicky I so wonder how things might be different thirty years ago but I am who I am now. Thanks for reading my poem
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 6:06:00 AM

    Dear Donna, The pieces lost are not lost but are waiting the moment To be together again! LOVE is going to put the puzzle of lost pieces onto a perfect canvas! Beautiful writing, touching the heart and provokes the mind! Thank you for sharing!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/6/2013 4:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Demetrios, these are lovely words of encouragement. Thank you for writing
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 9:41:00 PM

    Very true words friend. many bad times and good ones as well... just sharing them all... thanks for stopping by and writing to me. All experiences make us better people

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 8:51:00 PM

    A powerful write Donna, about regret and the dreams that don't come into fruition, yet if we have hope, tomorrow may bring a pleasant twist of events, one never knows in life when the tide can turn and bring us happiness, thank you for sharing, love, xxx

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/6/2013 4:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    True words, both good times and bad. Just sharing some of all. Thanks for stopping by and writing to me
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 7:46:00 PM

    Fill the hole empty of God first.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/5/2013 9:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    God is always first in my life. Since I was a child or I wouldn't have made it through many trials I have. Thanks for your words of encouragement and stopping by. Blessings
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 6:56:00 PM

    A very enjoyable poem that kindles the mind.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/5/2013 7:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks..for stopping by and understanding the thought. Blessings
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 4:18:00 PM

    Wow!! Beautifully written and very deep. I am mesmerized by your poem. Luv, Gail

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/5/2013 7:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Gail...coming from you that is a great compliment. Blessings
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 2:24:00 PM

    This is a brilliantly wondrous write my friend! I loved reading this delightful poem this afternoon! What a creative piece, Great Work!!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/5/2013 7:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Seems life provides us all the subject matter we need huh? Thank you once gain.