No Poem

Date: 2/16/2013 11:33:00 AM

I do agree with your explanations about each person being good and bad at the same time. In fact, life's purpose is to take the challenge and do our best to please God, knowing that He forgives the one who is sincere, even if he fails. Amazing write! Have a nice weekend, Charmaine! Love, Hanitra

Jack Jordan Date: 2/17/2013 8:48:00 AM

I love the dextra/sinistra, right brain/left brain development, the good and evil in us all, and the reference to the Magdelenes. Excellent piece. J

Justin Bordner

Date: 2/11/2013 2:19:00 PM

She is so natural, and willing to work all the angles of Life on this earth - beautifully strong juxtapositions in the pursuit of fulfulling self wawreness - great structure to the poem as well Charmaine - a universal woman - J.A.B. %

Susan Palli

Date: 2/11/2013 5:31:00 AM

Well written! So wonderful that God forgives everything if we are sincere. (Isaiah 1:18 if you wish to read)

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 2/10/2013 2:55:00 PM

.................................. ‡ Ps., I Can Still Taste The Red Grapes In Her Beauty's Intoxicating, Sweet, Sweet Wine, My Beautiful Precious, Beautiful Charmaine ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

SHAH JEHAN ASHRAFI

Date: 2/10/2013 6:49:00 AM

tOO GOOD..DARING i MUST SAY...wELL AM HAPPY TO BE ON POETRY SOUP... iS MAGDELENE SUFFERING FORM SPLIT PERSONALITY??/HA HA...nICELY WRITTEN...

arthur vaso

Date: 2/10/2013 12:01:00 AM

Very well written, beautiful

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2013 11:19:00 AM

just stopping by to say hi, I saw you leave a comment to a fellow poet and was happy to see you over here recently.

Divine Friday Idiong

Date: 2/9/2013 8:56:00 AM

Wow! So paradoxical!

Anne Currin

Date: 2/7/2013 3:45:00 PM

WOW! This is a stunner- and really quite inspiring! You show true talent, and especially passion in your words- this is absolutely breath taking :)

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 2/7/2013 12:12:00 PM

Forbidden romances ...... looking for tenderness and love ..... sexy lady, but really very lonely. - A very well written poem, Carma - There are many people who live like "Madame Magdalene" in 2013. - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

FRANK H.

Date: 2/6/2013 9:57:00 PM

I don't know what Is more interesting? Your Poem... or the comments it has inspired! One thing I've truly learned in MY life...we never really know how far we will go... till the situation arises. And it may really surprise the BEST...or the WORST... of each of us! So great to come here and be enchanted by you and your most intriguing writes!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2013 4:22:00 PM

Wow, CHarma, your poem is beautiful... and I see why your pen is adored... a good perception of it all... love the story and flow... always~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2013 11:50:00 PM

wow, quite a character study of this modern Mary Magdalene. What inspired this one? I just never know what you will write about next, charma. You are full of surprises! and always writing with such passion and compassion.

Charmaine Chircop Date: 2/6/2013 1:38:00 AM

Hi Andrea.I was thinking about the good and evil of each person and how everyone including me has a little bit of magdalene in us .Maybe we dont sleep with other men..Maybe we help the poor wholeheartedly but Im sure there is a part of evil in me as there is a part of kindness.Its life basically..We fall to rise again.What inspired this?I wrote this about a year ago sctually then threw the scribbles away..but after rreading a poem re Our ego and ability to learn to love i got inspired to.use last year's idea again.Madame Magdalene is almost like the conscience of our deeds

daver austin

Date: 2/5/2013 3:16:00 PM

This one speaks worlds about most mortals, give or take a few prayers, give or take a few sins. Great stuff, Char. Love, daver

john loving iii

Date: 2/5/2013 10:24:00 AM

We learn how to be like God while God learns how to be like us.

Post Comments