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Just a crack

life struggling beneath the frozen water
winter blues surround the lake
just a crack pours life back

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  1. Date: 2/17/2013 6:58:00 AM

    Very descriptive and expressive winning work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 6:01:00 AM

    Love this Irfana.Congrats on your in the contest.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:51:00 PM

    many congrats on your win in the contest Irfana

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:33:00 PM

    Irfana.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 4:23:00 PM

    this was so good, Irfana. congrats on the HM.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 4:05:00 PM

    Congrats on your HM, Irfana! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 3:31:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. Connie

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 3:57:00 AM

    beautiful struggle...the last statement..give it an amazing punch...i soo love it :-)

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 8:56:00 AM

    Even though you represented struggle I somehow found this poem very serene. I enjoyed it very much.