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Troubled Experience

Why oh why, I have afflictions
regarding ever more increasing problems in
my indigenous language, a stigma of
diction and spelling, also grammar incomprehension.    
Never once could I seem able
to use correct adjectives, to embroider
to enlighten. So one gave English
the elbow, to entrap to ogle
the anatomy, belonging only to one’s
natural opposites, girls, innovative girls amorously.
This orchestration that organised female intrigue
wetted a growing appetite, for use
with one’s never ending troubled experience!

© Harry J Horsman 2013     

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  1. Date: 3/3/2013 9:18:00 AM
    Good morning Harry, congratulations with your awesome win..xox~PD

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 6:25:00 AM
    Excellent write Harry!Congrats on the win!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 5:59:00 PM
    congrats on your win Harry

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 1:00:00 PM
    big congratulations harry , i knew it would be a winner well done xx

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 12:01:00 PM
    'Arry!!! What a write!!! Well done!! Big Congratulations !!! Love ya deb

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 11:24:00 AM
    A joyous tumult of words! Congrad's on your winning write.Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 10:17:00 AM
    Harry, Congratulations on your placement in my contest, I just loved the idea of giving English the elbow, enjoyed this one a lot, well done...David

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 6:09:00 PM
    Harry, your poetry is fascinating to me. Reading it is like trying to catch a butterfly with your hands. What's interesting about this one is that it is so untrue, or else that you're pulling our leg. I think it's the latter, you rascal! Cheers, Roy

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 12:54:00 PM
    English language crazy at best. A great write Harry. I totally agree with your thoughts of the English form. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 10:38:00 AM
    Hay! Master, how are you? I agree with you totally. It happens to many. Rare gets less trouble, i think. You have expressed nicely about the troubled experience in English language. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 7:40:00 AM
    Harry; I like your poem, but troubled expirences - don't feel like the Lone Ranger, You are not alone. i was never that great in English. My best subjects were Science and Math, always got straight A's. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 12:27:00 AM
    Mmmmmm troubled experience now that sounds exciting Harry. Haha. ...Seren

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 11:05:00 PM
    oh Harry, I find it hard to imagine you having troubles with English OR the ladies. Your poetry is amazing and I saw that picture of you as a young man. Come on now!!! A very interesting poem!

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 10:45:00 AM
    I find this quite humorous harry, I am rubbish at English but I could find some adjectives for female anatomy, I have a couple for male anatomy too xx

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 10:29:00 AM
    wish to share these thoughts ...lovely and great usages,Harry...

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 10:20:00 AM
    Well we feel the same way believe it or not if I got your message, anyway very cute...

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 9:38:00 AM
    Not sure exactly the proper interpertation but I got a sense of humor from this one..I am sure that you have some very good adjectives in one area of your vocabulary..Sara