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Sparkles Like Diamonds

Shall I tell you a story of sweet victory?
How even the blind one could suddenly see!

There's little old me with a case of the blues.
Then I dug out my red dress,the sadness to lose.

Now I'm painting up poverty,making it shine.
Having some glasses of dandlelion wine.

There's a big shaft of light that I'm gazing through.
If you care to come with me then you'll see it too.

A gold-dusted staircase that winds to the sun.
It sparkles like diamonds when our day is done.

Sparkles like diamonds on a silver edged tray;
the sun put to bed and the moon come to play!



written February 4th,2013

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  1. Date: 2/17/2013 9:31:00 PM

    Deb, stopping by to enjoy all of Seren's "Shaft of light " winners.. Congratulations with your awesome poem. xox~ PD

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 9:19:00 AM

    Congrats on your win. Connie

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:54:00 PM

    thats lovely Deb, many congrats on your win

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 9:58:00 PM

    This poem is just delightfully fun !! Pour me a glass...let's go out for some moonlight fun !! Love it !! Congrats on your win !

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 9:19:00 PM

    This was fun to read and follow you all the way through..congratulations

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 7:40:00 PM

    Congrats Deb and Thank You......Seren

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 1:10:00 PM

    I like the silver edged tray myself, the moon has always been my muse! This is a tremendous write, I enjoyed reading this glorious poem this afternoon! A delightful piece this one is, Great Work!! PS This will do very well in the contest!

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 9:09:00 AM

    Beautiful -

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 7:34:00 AM

    An excellent version of the shaft of light. A bright and lifting couplet I must say. Good luck Deb on the contest my friend. It sounds like a win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 6:50:00 AM

    A great story Deb, I'm enjoying it. - Thank you! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)