Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox

 
About This Poem

Framed in Glass

Framed in Glass Starburst crystals cling to the window pane Lavish mounting for a frame Cardinals in the snow All rights reserved @ Debra Squyres 2013 Form is Kimo: 3 lines wih10-7-6 syllable count

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 8:30:00 AM

    very lovely kimo

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 5:55:00 AM

    Beautiful imagery here Debra.Congrats on your win in the contest.

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 3:59:00 AM

    Loved the images, Debra. Congrats on the win!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 5:45:00 AM

    Very descriptive work..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:43:00 PM

    you painted a perfect winter scene, congrats on your win Debra

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:32:00 PM

    Debra.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 4:16:00 PM

    Well, I am so pleased to see this one again as I go thru the winners list. BIG congrats to you, dear. Soupmail.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 3:55:00 PM

    I can just see the red cardinals against the white snow. A beautiful picture. Congrats on your win, Debra! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 3:22:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. A beautiful painting. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 11:58:00 AM

    Crystaline beauty of exquisite prose. A valentine picture of a natural rose. :)

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 9:14:00 AM

    this is beautiful - I've not done a Kimo and this is inspiriation to try one.

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 10:00:00 PM

    There was a question about cardinal having three syllables, though I and the dictionary I used counted it as two..pronounced card-knal....but I took out the "of" so the syllable count in last line is now 6.

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 6:24:00 PM

    seriously, you have captured such a beautiful moment in time, the most important rule of this form.

    Squyres Avatar Debra Squyres Date: 2/3/2013 6:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Andrea. It was hard not to put movement into the scene. I first used the cardinals eating seed...and thought..that's movement..so changed it up.
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 6:23:00 PM

    WOWOWOW, one of the best kimo i have seen in a long time. FAVE

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 5:10:00 PM

    This is a very wonderful Kimo my friend! I enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a spectacular piece, Great Work!!