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Sara Kendrick Date: 2/21/2013 1:49:00 PM Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your descriptive work..Sara
Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/17/2013 4:34:00 PM this is pretty cool, JOann. I have to hurry to make dinner, so I can't check out that site. Anyway, very quickly. Swap quatrain. I am sure you could find description of it online, but in a nutshell, here is what it is. The first line is in two phrases. By line four, you reverse those phrase, you SWAP them, and you rhyme AABB. Go see mine and see what I mean. If you read mine knowing what it is now, I think it will make sense!
Nathan A. Date: 2/6/2013 1:53:00 PM this rings to me more like a free verse then a haiku. i could be wrong but my understanding of haikus is that they have a description in the second line and end with an action. lines two and three are a complete senstence broken in half and i dont see those in haikus. form aside its very good writing goes with the picture quite well.
Russell Sivey Date: 2/3/2013 2:25:00 PM This is a perfect entry into the contest, a great depiction of the picture! I loved reading this amazing poem this afternoon! You have written another gorgeous poem, what a pretty piece, Great Work!!