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  1. Date: 2/25/2013 4:54:00 PM

    Oh wow, Joann. This is incredible...I was captured.

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 7:36:00 AM

    Very descriptive and expressive winter scene..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 10:50:00 AM

    Joann, Congratulations on your winning "mixed up poem." Have yourself a nice day~ :-) xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:40:00 PM

    I felt the shiver in my spine upon reading this. Well done. I like the haiku !! Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 8:55:00 AM

    congrads on your win Joann..

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 4:05:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Joann luv xx

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 7:06:00 PM

    Perfect form Joan it was the brevity which held you back. Please do write me a longer one with maybe 2 haiku for Spring? Congrad's Light & love

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 4:56:00 PM

    Well don congrats on top ten win

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 8:14:00 AM

    A very nice poem for the contest. Good luck. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 4:01:00 PM

    Hey there Joan thanks for the entry..the prose is FINE..please indicate where your cut is and perhaps go more objective (both the words sentinels & guard seem subjective to me] Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 3:53:00 PM

    Joann, this is an excellent haibun. The haiku wraps-up the strong use of imagery in the prose section(the personification of the birches is a lovely effect). Well done.

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 2:18:00 PM

    This is a magnificent and remarkable write my friend! You have written a dynamic and a spectacular poem Joann! I loved reading this tremendous piece this afternoon! What a fantastic poem, Great Work!!