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Burning Embers

B urning embers growing dim
U sually would be suggesting
R esulting love affair diminishing
N ot in this case, the embers are making
I nteresting visions of love with their coals
N ow love is deep within their souls
G oing from strength to strength with no control

E ndless nights of breathless moaning deep
M aking love until saturated, too tired to sleep
B ecoming as one in mind and soul
E ntwined forever in lust and love, now are whole
R esulting in two becoming one
S ensually and sexually the battle for love is won

EMBERS BURNING BRIGHTLY FOREVER.


Penned by Seren Roberts

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  1. Date: 2/22/2013 6:18:00 PM

    Congratulations to you Seren. A wonderful poem of passionate love.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/22/2013 10:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 8:04:00 AM

    Congratulations on your great win in the contest,Serene

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/22/2013 10:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Fabiyas and thank you....Seren
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 8:02:00 AM

    Congrats on your well deserved win. Connie

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/22/2013 10:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Connie
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 6:57:00 AM

    Wonderful acrostic here Seren. Big congrats on the win!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/22/2013 10:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Yesha
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 12:48:00 AM

    Hi congratulations Seren , I really like this one, and it is well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/22/2013 10:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mandy, that will be nice for you to have more time with us again...Seren
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 11:59:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poem and win Seren. Love, Joyce

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/22/2013 10:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Joyce you are kind ...Seren
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 7:15:00 PM

    congrats on a fine win Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/22/2013 10:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Joseph
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 5:43:00 PM

    Beautiful, sensual and full of Love !! Enjoyed the read. Congrats on your win.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/21/2013 6:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Debra......Seren
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 5:11:00 PM

    Seren, congratulations! in Gail's "Burning Embers " contest.. a delightful burring poem.. always~ PD

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/21/2013 6:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you P.D. ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 4:14:00 PM

    Seren,

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/21/2013 6:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Gail .....Seren
    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 2/21/2013 4:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Seren, congratulations on your win in my Burning Embers contest. Thank you. Hugs and luv, Gail
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:50:00 AM

    This is one great beautiful poem. You did a perfect job on it. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/21/2013 6:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Lucilla
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 12:19:00 PM

    This is a brilliant write, a truly immaculate write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this afternoon! This acrostic fits the contest perfectly Seren! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/3/2013 12:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you once again Russell...Seren
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 9:45:00 AM

    A very steamy write, Seren! Is it hot in here or is it just me? Where's a fan when you need one? lol This is really good Seren. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/3/2013 12:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    HaHa Will send a bucket of ice over....Seren