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Building Love

takes two to create
built upon two hearts so strong...
castles in the mind
each stone placed with loving care
mason cements strength and trust.

© Harry J Horsman 2013    

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  1. Date: 2/18/2013 6:25:00 PM

    Good morning my fav poet,,, just stopping by to enjoy your excellent write...thanks dear Harry for always sharing your great talent <3 <3 <3 Sk

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 7:24:00 AM

    i like that idea - castles in the mind, placed with loving care - good one harry!

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 10:31:00 AM

    Excellent one enjoyed my friend. It carries a great philosophy of love building in to the hearts of two creating new structures. Thanks for your lovely comment my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 3:29:00 PM

    very nice, Harry... so true. Hope you're having a great day.

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 11:21:00 AM

    Tanka with an important message...love !!

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 1:10:00 AM

    Hi Harry good morning this is wonderful lots of truth thats for sure, have a good week my friend, all thebest Owen

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 11:53:00 PM

    This is the blueprint to a strong love. Working through life with a companion, unconditionally! Amazing piece Harry!

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 4:49:00 PM

    Words of wisdom are painted through your magical pen. A delight to read your poem today. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 2:38:00 PM

    So true .... a partnership / team work! - Well written Harry. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 1:13:00 PM

    Oh, so good, Harry. I want to add to what Annelise said -and the foundation is God. If He is the midst, you know you got it right. Love ya, Toquyen

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 10:42:00 AM

    How very true, Harry... love, like any building or structure, is only as strong as its foundation. Well done! Annalise

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 9:02:00 AM

    this is a splendid tanka, Harry, a strong foundation the key!

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 7:20:00 AM

    Hope you are one of the luck ones that find trust like that and give trust like that. Wonderful....

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 7:17:00 AM

    Harry, this is truly a beautiful poem, trust is so important in a relationship, without it you have nothing really. Constance

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 6:33:00 AM

    Trust which can be destroyed in one wrong event is so much a key to a good relationship..Great work..Enjoyed reading ...Thanks for stopping by...I hope that your day is good..Sara

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 5:32:00 AM

    This is so cleverly done and so true it does take two harry xx