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The Idea

So focused was I

On the idea of falling in love

I didn't realize

I had my guy

All along

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  1. Date: 5/20/2013 6:29:00 PM

    I hope he is a nice guy and treats you like a princess.

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil Date: 5/21/2013 8:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awww, that's so sweet of you! Strange you say treat me like a princess, my whole name means flower princess. :D And he better treat me well or I'll have to use my bat. Let's hope it doesn't come to that! (Haha, joke! Sort of...)
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 11:28:00 PM

    " Dreaming about the day when you wake up and find that what you're looking for has been here the whole time."... funny how I don't exactly care for Swift's music... yet I know the lyrics *looks around*. I think when you set yourself for these ideas, you set yourself up for disappointment. The perfect person for you probably is nothing like you would envision him... best be open to the possibilities :)

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil Date: 5/12/2013 1:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hahaha! OOh I knew you liked Swift somewhere! ;) (secret's safe with me!) Yep, I definitely learned that. Usually when it's the most unexpected or when you give up, it happens. Lot's of patience and commitment has to go in it, but one day I know it'll hit me. :D
  1. Date: 2/2/2013 10:46:00 PM

    ‡ Like A Movie Wherein One Finds Their Love, Sweet Beautiful Caleah, Were Their Best Friend And Or, Lived Right Next Door ˜ Cool Poe !nd Congrats, Upon Finding Your Love ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil Date: 2/3/2013 10:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rachel!! :D I'm so glad you liked it!