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Haiku 7

A feathered cargo,
black shroud of migrating birds.
Mysteries abound.

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:48:00 PM

    hey, I see I am back to my own comment. This must be where I first met you!!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 2/27/2013 5:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I believe it was. Thanks a bunch for taking the time to read them all. I'll do my best to respond. J
  1. Date: 2/2/2013 1:38:00 PM

    I like it Jack! Haiku is often a mystery to me..lol..BG

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 2/27/2013 5:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's something of a mystery to me too. I like the abstraction and minimalist quality. Thanks for reading it.
  1. Date: 2/2/2013 12:32:00 PM

    wow, I love the imagery of that second line and the first line, incredible!!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 2/2/2013 2:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks again! Jack