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Turbulent at the entrance,
Arrayed along the ambulances
The turmoil figure in me
Drains curiosity below the tummy
 
A sudden flash of the lightning lash
My expected as though to unleash
Within, climbing up
Nothing to cause a stop

Keener the beauty
To darkness a pity
Above, the hairs of palms
Giving to me balm

The palace of palaces ahead
Colours of royalty in all stead
The atmosphere nourishing
As wealth flourishing.

 Now home at the call
Along with the all
My joy soon diminish
The entrance de novo to finish

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  1. Date: 4/3/2013 3:45:00 AM

    great twist of emotions, and use of rhymes... I really liked the sound of it when i read... good work.

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 10:55:00 PM

    Olorunsoqo, :-) Congratulations with your creative top featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself an excellent time here on the soup... I know I sure am. * or should I say I will at least try. Always~ & ~ Forever*LINDA"