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Comin' to You

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Comin' to You

Now at night I lay alone in bed
I wipe away the tears I've shed
But you're still gone and could care less, do you?
Oh heaven's dove has left her love
she gone to be with God above
So here I lay and dream of comin' to you
 
Comin' to you, Comin' to you
Comin' to you, Comin' to you

 A vial of pills sits side the bed
 and waits for me to tilt my head
But, He won't let me get there that way will you?
I'd rise then fall, for He won't call
until I've kissed the wailing wall
So here I lay and dream of comin' to you

Comin' to you, Comin' to you
Comin' to you, Comin' to you

The years have come the pains still here
some thoughts of you are crystal clear
But your still gone and I still care, do you?
I search the sky for your on high
my need for you I'll not deny
So here I lay and dream of comin' to you

Comin' to you, Comin' to you
Comin' to you, Comin' to you

I saw the Doctor just yesterday
He said the cancer' has had its way  
But, all I see's an open gate before you..
I see a dove she flies above
a holy ghost that's full of love
So here I lay but I'll be comin' to you

Comin' to you, Comin' to you
Comin' to you, Comin' to you


*dedicated to all whose love's have past
know they're waiting....
 



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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 6:51:00 PM
    That is amazing, sad, sad, why do we have to suffer often in life, i love the spirit , are you ok, as i read the word cancer? hope you are fine. Love Terry xoxo.a 7..Fave>>>>>>

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:38:00 PM
    Congratulations on another fine win, Deb...heartwrenching! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 8:51:00 PM
    Lovely poem...Congrats dear friend!

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 5:32:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win with this very moving poem Deb. I thought it divine!

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 3:55:00 PM
    Oh, Debbie Do, so tender and soulful. Absolutely perfect! Congratulations on your win in Frank's contest. love and hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 3:05:00 PM
    Wow.........this is heart-gut wrenching...I can hear it in my head. Very sad and moving! Well done, once again!

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 12:26:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Debbie.

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 12:02:00 PM
    congratulations on your win...

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 10:01:00 AM
    Good morning Debbie.. Congrats!!! :-) on your winning poem. *Always~PD

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 9:18:00 AM
    I just knew this would make the list...heartfelt words here you've written. Wonderfully dedicated to the one's we love who have passed..thanks. Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 10:34:00 AM
    Halleluyah! ;-) You got this bang on! Line 3: you're, line 4, Heaven's, other: pain's, you're still gone, you or you're on high (?) PS--- this could have been written by my dad. My stepmom and he had cancer at the same time. She was diagnosed and died within 5 weeks, and he fought for almost two more years. xox Dee love what you wrote...

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 9:01:00 AM
    wonderful poetry,, no better still beautiful poetry, and so caring so sincere....

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 6:52:00 PM
    dear Debbie...you drew and AWE..on reader's lips with your brilliant tallent.. enjoyed this poem so very much,..thanks dear for sharing <3...Sk

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 5:42:00 PM
    Very expressive work about the topic of loved ones who have gone on and someone's desire to see them again...I will meet you in the morning just inside the Eastern Gate..Lines from a song that came to mind...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 4:51:00 PM
    Debbie anything I said except thank you would be too much.

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 3:11:00 PM
    Wiping a tear...I do believe they await us...so beautiful, Debbie !!