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Wishing And Hoping


We suitors were nervous while standing in line 
'til mademoiselle informed us of her choice; 
intoxicating, her bouquet divine, 
like the vintage of a rich, full-bodied wine; 
fearful she would not hearken to my voice, 
overjoyed when she consented to be mine! 


meter: 11/10/10/11/10/11
rhyme: abaaba

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  1. Date: 2/25/2013 12:26:00 AM

    Really enjoyed this one, cheers!!!

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 7:27:00 AM

    Keith - Always room for one more on my dance card. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 11:19:00 AM

    Unique and romantic ..... (it's something: "To hit the nail on the head" .....) I "wishing and hoping" that all is well with you, Keith! Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 8:43:00 AM

    wow Keith, shades of classical poetry here, and nothing on earth beats that, you are truly a awesome poet.....

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 12:44:00 PM

    Haha, you guys have to stand in line? Cute one, Keith. Enjoyed!

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 8:29:00 PM

    Oh, you are a true romantic...very nice..it made me sigh. BG

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 6:47:00 PM

    Beautiful poem, Keith, I love the rhyme and meter, and thoughts and words... ;)