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It's like I have slipped down this slope
And into the valley of death, I now rot
But trying the best that I can to cope
If I don't go dool, ally and lose the plot

Thinking of this girl who wanted to elope
Asking me, do you want to tie the knot
It felt like I was lost in this kaleidoscope                                            
Still I'd ask myself is she the one or not

Knocked off balance, I'm on a tight rope
There were many things between us, a lot
But then, I could have been a bit of a dope 
Until gone, do you know what you had got

Though there was a time I did have hope
I was happy as Larry, now it's sqidly sqott
And now all one seems to do is just mope
With the baggage I carry, yeah David Scott


Bits of this were fom a poem I wrote back in 2005
called where do I go from here another interpretasion of
a past time with ex written june 2012..........................
INSPIERD BY FRIENDS GROUP CONVERSATIONS AT THESE TIMES
ITS HOW IT FELT AT TIMES iM SURE iVE MENTIONED IN ALOT 
OF MY OTHER WRITES  
this has been reedited as I felt over the place before
this time in better context which been trying to do with others
not i was trying t keep to a pattern also with words in between
to keep flow but still keep sense of what im talking about

  











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  1. Date: 2/8/2013 2:36:00 AM
    I really love this poem Scott.It speaks about big decisiions..maybe regrets and lost hope which ones was not lost at all.We all.pass through such moments i guess but as the motto goes ..'What doesn t kill you makes you stronger..Great poem here